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  • viralstorm

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    Mr. Green

    Indeed. He's a very troubled character and a lot of people wont see just how crazy he is about Tegan until the end. Instead everyone is looking at the way he acts towards her as his way of being a control freak. So no one really sees that it's an act. Instead he's a maniac.

    But that will all change along the way.
    January 31st, 2013 at 04:35am
  • prettypsyche

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    @ viralstorm
    The first scene with Zayn in it was telling. He was essentially saying by quoting that line from Great Expectations that Teegan could literally spit on him and he'd still love her. The loud proclamations about how he was "allowing" her to leave in the knowledge she'd come crawling back sounds a lot like him trying to save face. If he didn't care, why would he send flowers with a quote from her favorite book? Why would the new boyfriend be so convinced Teegan would eventually leave him? How would Zayn know instinctively to drive to her place even though he was drunk and in a lot of pain? Why does she still have Zayn's number even though they supposedly broke up a year and a half ago? See what I mean? They're both very much in love but too stubborn to admit it.
    January 31st, 2013 at 04:26am
  • viralstorm

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    Thanks for commenting on Cloudy! It's good to see that some people don't think Zayn is a complete psycho.
    January 31st, 2013 at 03:46am
  • ImpulsiveFreedom

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    Thanks for commenting on Hoping For A Fairy Tale. And I'm sorry no detailed sex scene but i felt my previous ones with Harry and Skye were just really crap. So I stopped writing them :P I'm terrible at writing smut!! :P
    January 27th, 2013 at 01:32pm
  • Ashlala93

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    Hi. I'm just leaving you this comment in regards to Little Girl, and why I haven't updated. I really wish I could, but do you remember me saying how my old laptop died and I had to get a new one? Well, that one got stolen when my house was broken into a couple of weeks ago :/ I'm currently posting this comment on a public computer, I've lost all my work, including all the new chapters I was going to post, which means I'll have to start them all over again. I should hopefully be back in the new year, as I'm hoping to get yet ANOTHER new laptop after Christmas. So sorry!
    December 20th, 2012 at 09:48pm
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    I totally forgot to add the song thanks for pointing it out. And the song is The Maine's Good Love. It's a amazing song and I hope you check it out. And all of your questions will be answered through out the story just keep reading love. Thanks for commenting! <3
    November 27th, 2012 at 11:32pm
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    Thanks for the comment on my story 'White lies' :)
    October 28th, 2012 at 02:00pm
  • prettypsyche

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    I am actually a Criss Angel fan. I discovered Celldweller after r coming across Switchback and Frozen, and got more intrigued after finding out the Mindfreak collaborated with Mr. Klayton. My interest in his work, sadly, only in those two songs.
    August 12th, 2012 at 05:21am
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    @ prettypsyche
    Haha. I should totally consider that. Mr. Green
    So you're a Celldweller fan?
    August 12th, 2012 at 05:02am
  • prettypsyche

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    @ Hawkeye;

    I would like it really like it if you expanded on this story. Maybe have flashbacks of how Klay met this woman, lost her, and plan on winning her back.
    August 12th, 2012 at 04:55am
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    Haha. Sorry my one-shot was so short.

    Thank you so much for the comment! <3
    August 12th, 2012 at 04:44am
  • prettypsyche

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    I was in the "special" classes in high school, so had classes with some real winners. /SARCASM. The stories I could tell...
    August 10th, 2012 at 10:04pm
  • Ashlala93

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    @ prettypsyche
    Yeah, the youth are pretty much the same here.
    August 10th, 2012 at 09:48pm
  • prettypsyche

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    @ Colour Me Stupid. Ah. Wish we had that in America. But considering the people I went to high school with, perhaps that's a good thing! LOL
    August 10th, 2012 at 03:57am
  • Ashlala93

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    Thanks again for the comment on Little Girl. In answer to your question, students over the age of sixteen in Australia can be paid a 'student allowance'. It's supposed to be an incentive to stay in school. In fact, if you drop out of school without having finished year twelve and don't take on any other type of study (like an apprenticeship or something), then the government refuses to pay you anything until you turn twenty-one, which is a bit stupid seeing as the legal age of independence in Australia is eighteen. Also, the payment is only three or four hundred dollars a fortnight (how much you get depends on how much your parents earn), so you can imagine how financially screwed the Matthews' family really is.
    August 10th, 2012 at 03:43am
  • prettypsyche

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    Look, I have no control over what story I'm supposed to get as part of the reader swap, ok? Knowing the character or not, I wasn't into the story at all. The first chapter is supposed to hook you in and after a few words into it, I could read any more. It wasn't a personal attack.
    August 9th, 2012 at 09:57pm
  • leecasper17

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    If you bothered to read the first chapter of my story, you might have realized that I wrote it so that if readers didn't know who the exact player was, they'd be able to read it as original fiction. The focus isn't on the player; he's only a character in an otherwise original story.
    August 9th, 2012 at 09:23pm
  • Ashlala93

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    @ prettypsyche
    Anthony gives it to Holly a few times throughout the story, although he doesn't get his comeuppance until a bit later on. I promise it'll be good though. And yes, Woolworths is still going strong here. It's one of the biggest supermarket chains in the country. It's not quite as good as Coles (the other supermarket chain where most of my husband's family works, so I may be prejudiced), but I don't see them closing down anytime soon.
    August 7th, 2012 at 02:03am
  • prettypsyche

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    @ Colour Me Stupid.
    Thank you for replying. I also want to say that it's my sincere hope that the next chapter where the stepdad tries to pull shit on his stepdaughter, either she or Billie kicks him in the nuts. Even better if the mom has a moment of clarity and does it herself. Just saying.

    BTW, there are Woolworths in Australia?! In America, they all closed down years ago. I know about them because my mom used to reminice about shopping there as a child.
    August 7th, 2012 at 12:29am
  • Ashlala93

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    Hi! Thanks so much for your comment on Little Girl, it really means a lot to me. And yes, it is an AR fic where Green Day never signed the major label deal. Also, 'Wog' is a politically incorrect term Aussies use for not just Greeks, but Italians and Macedonians and all other ethnic Europeans. It used to be a sort of racist term way back in the day, but has become more acceptable over the years.

    Thanks again for the comment and I really hope you keep reading!
    August 6th, 2012 at 11:03pm