October 7th, 2011 at 05:48pm
Haha oh yes.
You just end up loving Anita and the men in the series.
And meh, don't worry bout it.
A great story doesn't always have the most attractive lines, it's thee picture it paints as well.
:D
But I guess one of the most important critques are your own. But everyone once in a while you go on your gut.
The mere fact that a story coomes from YOUR head is a blessing in on itself.
Don't be too hard on your self. What youu wrote is awesome!
A real great piece of art and life brought to a new page. :D