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  • Through-the-Night

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    I personally am more favored towards third person, but that's my opinion. I think in your first chapter, you didn't use other people's perspectives very much so you could probably get away with changing it to first person. Another thing you could do is just say that its a prologue, it'll make things a little more obvious I think. Obviously your choice though, you're writing :D
    September 28th, 2011 at 02:59am
  • palazzbm

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    Thanks for the comment on my new story! :)
    September 28th, 2011 at 01:55am
  • morbid;

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    when I get a chance, I sure will :D
    September 27th, 2011 at 10:11pm
  • Moriarty

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    Yay! *Does happy dance*
    September 27th, 2011 at 09:29pm
  • Moriarty

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    Some people are assholes. As long as you love the story, continue with it.
    September 27th, 2011 at 12:35am
  • Moriarty

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    Only if you think it's for the best. But for what it's worth, I still love it :)
    September 27th, 2011 at 12:28am
  • celestial_royalty

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    yay =]
    September 26th, 2011 at 06:43pm
  • Moriarty

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    Lol yay!
    September 26th, 2011 at 04:51am
  • Moriarty

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    Hmm, what would I like to see?
    Maybe the background on all of the guys and what happened? Idk, I'm weird.
    September 26th, 2011 at 04:42am
  • celestial_royalty

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    Umm check out my stories? C: lmfaoo
    September 26th, 2011 at 04:03am
  • celestial_royalty

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    hi there- I'm Mathia, I write lots of stories and I love getting feedback so please tell me what you think; there's Harry Potter, Twilight, A7x, Originals, Vampire Diaries, Chronicles of Narnia. =] Thanks!
    September 26th, 2011 at 03:28am
  • lips of deceit.

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    haha, i meant like he was with them. x3.
    but you're welcome. i love me a wolf zacky story. x)
    September 25th, 2011 at 09:32pm
  • morbid;

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    im writing too....0_0
    September 25th, 2011 at 03:37am
  • morbid;

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    too bad :P
    ITS GONE NOW!
    September 25th, 2011 at 03:34am
  • morbid;

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    Too bad!
    *takes and shoots self*
    September 25th, 2011 at 01:57am
  • morbid;

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    Kill me -.-
    September 25th, 2011 at 01:33am
  • morbid;

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    Yay :)
    September 25th, 2011 at 01:19am
  • Moriarty

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    Yes, yes we are XD
    September 25th, 2011 at 12:26am
  • Moriarty

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    HELLZ TO THE YES
    September 25th, 2011 at 12:21am
  • Moriarty

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    Sweet, we can be ADHD buddies :)
    September 25th, 2011 at 12:19am
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