StraightEdgeGirl / Comments

Ahaha yeah thirteen. I didn't put my age due to te fact that some people don't appreciate a thirteen year old kid writing stories where people are swearing like Daryl Dixon does :p.
And thank you for the comment :p

Yo, I got that story on here, the Raiders one.
Thought I'd let ya know :)

Lol I'm pretty decent at writing for a thirteen year old kid.

Haha maybe. The Raiders aren't in it a whole lot, just the first two chapters or so. Mainly Daryl and Spark grow up together and have a big falling out. She finds him, recognizes him and beats him up, dragging him back to the house where the Raiders are residing. They take Daryl back to the group (he's in pretty terrible shape, she was in the army and did quite a number on him) and there she finds Merle. She sticks around because Merle is there and he's her best friend. Then blah blah blah, fight, blah blah blah, don't want to give the story away. ;)

Lol that works, cuz I'm a crazy funny American girl.

Lol what should I take ya for? ;P

Yeah, no problem. I dunno if i'll ever post the story I wrote with them in it, but in case I do you might want to put a credit in there.
Other than such matters, I'm cool with you using them. It'll fit pretty nicely in yours, actually.

Then there can be a big walker thing when they go back to get Merle, but you can decide what you wanna do for that.

Ooookkaayy NOW I remember. Damn. Okay, so in a fanfiction I wrote I had this group called the Raiders. And the girl, Spark, started out with the Raiders at first until she found Daryl, recognized him, beat him up, and drove him back to the group.
You can use the Raiders if you want. Say Merle was part of them. The Raiders went through towns, killed any walkers in their path and robbed groups. Rumor was that they were ruthless, even though they weren't. If a town was completely infested, they'd rig it up so the place would blow. Merle can be with them, and say the group captures a Raider when they go to town (similar to the incident with Randall). And they have the problem with "we can't kill him he knows where Merle is," thus leading to an argument and lots of drama, possibly even between Jamie and Daryl due to the fact that the group doesn't want Merle but needs Daryl, and Daryl refuses to stay and let them starve to death (since there'll be no one to hunt for them) unless they let him back in.
Complicated, yes. Efficient, yes.

Whoa wait! You killed randall? I think I missed something.
To the story!!!

Merle? Hmmm.... Okay, so say Randall makes an appearance in your story and Jamie accidentally slips and says the name Dixon. And Randall recognizes it because Merle is in his survivor group. But they have to keep Randall alive in order to find him. Therefore , there's a lot of controversy because the rest of the group doesn't really want Merle around but Daryl and Jamie want to find him.

Merle? Hmmm.... Okay, so say Randall makes an appearance in your story and Jamie accidentally slips and says the name Dixon. And Randall recognizes it because Merle is in his survivor group. But they have to keep Randall alive in order to find him. Therefore , there's a lot of controversy because the rest of the group doesn't really want Merle around but Daryl and Jamie want to find him.

Merle? Hmmm.... Okay, so say Randall makes an appearance in your story and Jamie accidentally slips and says the name Dixon. And Randall recognizes it because Merle is in his survivor group. But they have to keep Randall alive in order to find him. Therefore , there's a lot of controversy because the rest of the group doesn't really want Merle around but Daryl and Jamie want to find him.

You're giving me some major ideas here.
See, so far I've stopped when Rick blows up and goes Ricktatorship on them.
In your opinion, should I wait and follow the show's story line, or do my own?
I'm ending them the same way, but different things will happen to the group depending on which way I go.

Lol yeah I would too.
Maybe.
Maybe he lives.
*mischievous smile*

Haha thank you. And they are to remain a mystery... For a little longer, anyways.

Lol! Yeah I was thinking about it... who knows... maybe I'll throw in a curveball or two. I actually have this written but the best thing about a computer is this wonderful tool called the backspace! Haha thank you for commenting as usual. You're awesome.

Lol thank you, I actually have it done on my computer... The injections have a good foreshadow? I added those in last minute and I wasn't sure it would stick right.

Thank you for the comment!

Haha can't make it a romance since she's so young. I wanted to put it in a kids perspective.