Reason why I fail IN OC STORY FORM 11/14/11

Journals are stupid, so I'll put it into the form of a story:"Elizabeth?" the tall blonde Irish boy called into the apartment. He was grateful and upset that his friend's apartment was unlocked."Nate?" the Boston bred brunette called from a distant bedroom at the end of the dim off-white hallway."Elizabeth? Where are- are you okay?" Nate asked as he came upon a sight he didn't expect."Do I look...
November 14th, 2011 at 10:14am