Thanks for the story comment :D I'm glad you liked it but...it's actually finished >.< I just clicked the completed button. But I hope you'll read more of my stories.
Hi....I would comment on your stories....but the sad truth is: I don't know how to.....:D xx But yeah, their good...just a couple of spelling and grammer errors tat make it hard to form the sentences, but I know what your trying to say, so it was easier for me to read...but if people don't know the insane way you talk it makes your work illegible and difficult to decipher....:D
You also jump in to what your trying get at a little too fast...slow it down just the tiniest bit and move your characters in a realistic time set and you'll have nailed it!!!
Hope this helps!!!
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