Well, as opposed to words in caps when your writing, italics might be a better choice. Or bold even. If you don't know how to do that just ask! :) People often like to see what the character is wearing so you could make a polyvore account.
Thank you so freaking much for your comment on my gerard story!
It was the best comment I got.
I definitly understand what your saying about the whole writer having to feel the story...honestly I was, but I was just fearing my readers weren't feeling it the same as I was....cause they were reading and I wasn't getting feed back so I was a little iffy... but I've decided that I'm going to keep it going because I feel it and I owe it to the readers to finish it:) thanks again for your comment...it really made my choice crystal clear.:)
I haven’t written much lately. But I’ve been editing a lot. :D And thank you! ^.^ I’m not really worried about it much anymore. I just let myself get too worked up thinking “Oh no, people won’t like it.” So it was mostly metal stuff. :/ But thank you! :D
CR, I just read the I Forgive You. I loved it. You are so deep in these stories. But watch your language young lady. It is kind of sad, but you describe the mother's home very well. For constructive criticism, I would make Frank Iero's house more extravagant, maybe emphasize the fact that he left Lilli to give her a better home. He is part of an amazing and successful band by the way. Oh, BTW you stole my name! You can't use Lillian! That is my favorite name in the entire world!! You know that. Will read other stories another day.