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  • Lady.V.

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    Hey...what's up? Nice to meet you, I'm Marian by the way! :-) I'm here to welcome you, so welcome to the creative world of Mibbs! :DDD Feel free to ask anything you want! :-) And check out my stuff +_+ Enjoy your stay!
    October 31st, 2011 at 07:38pm
  • eonax

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    No Problem :) What's up?
    October 31st, 2011 at 04:14pm
  • LifesLegend

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    Heyy Im April, if you could check out my story Dancing in the rain would be great. Tell me any thoughts, suggestions, errors, anything about it leave a comment. :))
    October 31st, 2011 at 02:26am
  • Synnatural

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    Haha no problem. I hate when I end up writing things wrong and the plot makes no sense. If you come across anything else that doesn't quite add up please tell me and I will be sure to edit it. It means a lot!
    October 31st, 2011 at 12:59am
  • Synnatural

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    Okay, turns out I wrote it correctly I am just explaining it wrong to you lol.

    In chapter 12 Matthew mentions a year and a half in jail, also in chapter 17. So I went though it to make sure I did it right, so at the trial she was aprox 3/4 months pregnant and would be showing I just don't address it (I might go back and edit it so it makes more sense) Matt got sent to jail in March so, Nathan is born July 23rd and Matt gets out of Jail in July and it chapter 21 the CPS worker mentions hes been out for two weeks, so he'd be home in time for Nathan's first birthday and such.

    I hope that makes more sense. You should see the drawing and chart I made to make sure the way I wrote it made it work. So i'll be sure to mention it in the next chapter and edit the trial scene. Shouldn't be that confusing but occasionally I forget even though I know how it works others don't. I HOPE IT MAKES MORE SENSE now lol. Thank you for pointing it out though, I really do appreciate it.
    October 31st, 2011 at 12:17am
  • Synnatural

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    Haha, no not a problem I know someone else probably has the same track of thinking that you do. I will for sure fix the problem if the way I worked it out in my head doesn't work. Thank you for pointing it out, occasionally I will think about it and either not explain or my head just doesnt make it come out right. So thank you!
    October 30th, 2011 at 11:49pm
  • Synnatural

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    She had only just gotten pregnant before the whole Marcus and Matthew thing, and Matt wasn't in for a full year. In one of the chapters, sorry I can't remember which, it gives you the actual time which was just a few months shy of a year but it's easier to round. To clarify for others I'll be sure to put that in the next chapter in case others are thinking the same thing. Thanks for the comment :)
    October 30th, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • KingSquishy

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    its nice to meet you too
    October 30th, 2011 at 05:57pm
  • KingSquishy

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    Hey welcome to mibba, I'm Jaimie, Lets talk, howa you today?
    October 30th, 2011 at 05:23pm
  • Just-A-Drummer

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    Haii (waving) Welcome to mibba! I hope you have a fantastic time here!
    If you need any help with anything i will try to help as best as i can haha
    https://www.facebook.com/pages/Tabitha-Lay/192634710813580?sk=wall
    On facebook im trying to get people to like my artwork and get a fan base, i made the page yesterday and it would really help if you liked my page?
    It would help me tons haha and thank you :D
    October 30th, 2011 at 01:56pm
  • hengstin.

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    Willkommen zur wunderbaren Seite, die Mibba heißt!
    (Welcome to the wonderful site called Mibba!)

    Hope you have a wonderful time on here. I'm whatever you feel like calling me. [I can't reveal my name to people until 1. Nov.]
    October 30th, 2011 at 06:11am
  • noname;;;

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    Yeah they are. Lol
    October 30th, 2011 at 06:04am
  • ThePerson

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    Welcome to the Mibba!
    October 30th, 2011 at 04:32am
  • Head-Ache

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    Hey Welcome to Mibba
    October 30th, 2011 at 04:16am
  • SALVATION!!!!!!!!

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    Welcome to mibba dudette, I love your piercings ^-^ I'm Dawn
    October 30th, 2011 at 03:56am
  • huiggkjnlk

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    welcome to mibba :) and im jealous of your piercings :o
    October 30th, 2011 at 03:44am
  • Say Goodbye.

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    No problem :)
    Nice to meet you too c:
    October 30th, 2011 at 03:15am
  • BVBxLOVE

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    Welcome to Mibba[:
    October 30th, 2011 at 03:14am
  • wiggle and giggle.

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    I'm good. Just watching some tv. What are you up to?
    October 30th, 2011 at 02:00am
  • wiggle and giggle.

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    Your welcome(: I'm Alyson. How are you?
    October 30th, 2011 at 02:59am
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