When you say "where is she going and why", if you mean the mom thats is a secret that you might find later on in the story and how you propose I make it less bland like what kind of things should I add.
kinda, XD it's not that weird once you read it! hehe I was disappointed though! T.T it stopped at chapter. seven.
Half rant done hehe :3 So find any good stories yet?
I [b]was[/b] reading a slash story that was kinda like a saw story, but it's not finished T.T I was sorta angry considering I was paying so much attention that my eyes are now all fuzzy from staring at the screen and imagining v.v but you'll find good stories :D
Hey Im April. If you have time could you read through the first chapter to my story Dancing in the Rain and hand me some of your opinions?? Any thoughts on what youd like to see happen next??
Heyy, Welcome to Mibba!! I'm Julia. I hope you have tons of fun here!
So, I wanted to tell you about this story I have called, 1001 Resasons Why I'm Still Single. Basically it's a story in which EVERYONE can be a part of and say what ROCKS about being single!
Please check it out: http://stories.mibba.com/read/429867/1001-Reasons-Why-Im-Still-Single
It's a really cool story and some of the stuff that people write is absolutely HALARIOUS! If you would like to add a chapter or two, please comment or message me, and I'll add you to the list of authors. I hope you like it as much as I do. :)
Also if you have any questions about mibba, I'm happy to help!