well.. even though i said that the action was me fav bit the absolute fave bit was probably the first 3 sentences. 'Instantly I began to cry. I couldn't’t help it. My heart was broken.' i'm not sure why really but i loved how they were simple sharp but still showed the emotion she was feeling!
Woot!
And hah finals suck, I know what you mean.
I'm not even kidding you, today on my history final one of my answers to a question worth four marks was "It was good just cause."
I didn't remember reading it and I couldn't think of anything to makeup so i'm hoping for maybe a .5 on it having a why beside the "it was good" part.
idunno, lol
it was just really good and well written.
it's good though i really do like it keep it up.
XD and don't end up like me where you end up updating like once every month XD
It got me hooked quickly! I read all the chapters in one go! a feat for someone like me with no attention span!
The story line is great + i love how emotive language.
would like to have some flashbacks of how bam hurt her when they were younger though.
:)
on another note..
*little* Pinch! *tiny* Punch! first of the month!!! No returns!!
mwhahahahahaha
.. sorry had to be done! .. :D
mxx