Like when the characters talk it needs to be 'Entered' when the next character starts talking to. Hehe that's the best way i can describe it! I'm not sure how else to describe it. I hope you get what I meant! If not oh well! Can't wait for the next chapter!
thats awesome, yeah i like to support unknown bands and i like a varitey of music, its nice to meet you! im Emily but I go by Mayhem. :) i love your name by the way!!