megalopolis528 / Comments

Aw thanks!

Thanks so much! Glad you liked it!

thanks for the add :)

Thanks so much for the friend request! Love the ideas you've got in your story - can't wait to read some more!

Thanks for reading my stories :] Glad that you like them. I also read your new one and just wanted to say it's got a great concept but your form needs more space. Everything is just one paragraph and it hurts the eyes. If you can separate paragraphs and but double spaces between dialoge that definitely helps. It gives the eyes a break and readers won't get lost in the lines and forget where they are on the page. Other than that it's great :]