FindingJames / Comments

Lol yeah like on line I'm sort of quietish but if you knew me in real life I am a Jabber Jaws!!! Lol and I sometimes like going ton rant/ramble mode too especially when it comes to A7X

Lol its ok :D
Sometimes I ramble too and I sometimes when I'm talking about something try to stop myself so I'm not rambling

Wow. It's funny when you mentioned The Outsiders, because I really love that book and I thought about it when you mentioned books that made you think. I can't believe that anyone would take the time to think about my story, but zi like that. I agree with you that I'm not going to waste hours of my life reading something that was just put together for money. You're awesome. Hopefully I can continue making you think

Lol thats cool yet I would be mad too I mean all that talk about commas??
My english teacher is sweet even if she is a bit old but like I never get english I know how to read and write plus spell but like all the acronyms and stuff like that I just dont understand hopefully I wont need to know too much of that in 9th

Coincidence, my eighth grade English teacher was also super mean but taught in a great way. I agree with the layers concept. I'm glad to see you like how the story has gaps for readers to fill in with their own thoughts. And I didn't want to write something watered down and explained, as you had put it, because how can someone connect with a story their own mind is hardly involved in? I enjoy your comments.

I get what you're saying...I think. Sometimes I feel weird for leaving so much out if this story, like what's going on with Gerard and those other people because Frank is too out of it to focus on what's really going on. But then again, it's my story and I do as I please :P Okay no but really, this whole story would be told nuch differently if it wasn't so wrapped up in Frank's mind, and I like that readers such as yourself understand that. I've never been one to enjoy watching a movie that explains everything, like just a random narrating voice at the beginning telling about the past. I'm not the kind of writer to sum everything up so it can be fully understood as it runs along. Thinking about thinking is something truly wonderful. Like, when you play rock paper scissors and try to guess your opponent's move. You think of their thinking. Most people choose scissors. But then you know the type of person who won't choose scissors, because you know that they also think about thinking. And that's what's going on. Frank doesn't know what Gerard knows, but he suspects that something could always be up. And it's crazy to trust that if he says he'll play scissors, that he actually will. Ha. I am just gonna send this now.

Lol thaks :)
Yeah I dont really do well with seperating paragraphs and commas but I shall learn soon

Thanks again! I like to write about unusual things in unusual ways. It makes it more of an escape to write when I have to go into a totally different mindset, as you had said. I sort of just sit down and type away without breaks until I have something and then hope it doesn't seem crazy. I like that no one has complained about not being able to catch on to anything. Because I'm going to start writing a lot weirder!

Awww why thank you so much! I always love to hear that people like my writing :)

Yeah so far but like I have others on my computer and I have a Hollywood Undead story on another site but like the story I have on here is the farthest I've ever gotten in a story ever and I'm afraid it would take me a while to upload

Hey, thanks for the comment on my story! I think I'm probably going crazy, too. It's been odd to write my story through the eyes of someone who pays so much attention to things, and I'm glad it makes me and you and probably others to become more thoughtful as well...

Thats great :D

Well I hope it works out :)

Oh I see I'm sorry to hear James maybe you can make it work some day :)

Yeah same here with the updating thing
But I think what u should do is write about something that u are really into at the moment and then see if u write a few chapter on it then post the story

Yeah I know how it feels I've had that happen plenty of times before

Lol thats cool :)

I'm good and nothing much sitting in my room listening to my A7X,FIR, and HU playlist wbu??

Lol well then I shall call you James :)

Hi James I'm Max you seem like a cool guy :)
Oh and would u prefer to be called James or Jimmy?? Lol