Thank you for the comment on my poem Sweetened with Folly ^.^ I prefer critiques way more than just, I love it comments :P Though one note I'd like to make that might help you with poetry rules in the future is that you don't have to follow everything with perfect grammar in poetry. The specific site rule is this.
"Correct grammar and spelling is necessary in poems, to an extent. Any violations of grammatical rules must be for an artistic purpose, as opposed to sloppiness or use of chat-speak."
Just for future reference XD You can break typical grammar rules as long as it is for an artistic purpose that benefits the poem :P
But thank you very much for your comment, I'll definitely give it a look over and see what i can change according to your comments :)
"Correct grammar and spelling is necessary in poems, to an extent. Any violations of grammatical rules must be for an artistic purpose, as opposed to sloppiness or use of chat-speak."
Just for future reference XD You can break typical grammar rules as long as it is for an artistic purpose that benefits the poem :P
But thank you very much for your comment, I'll definitely give it a look over and see what i can change according to your comments :)