kristenmichelle / Comments

Thanks for commenting on Cherry Bomb!x

Woo, thank you for the comment! I'm glad you liked it. I'm also glad you like the layout :3 I'm quite proud of it, it's one of my better ones (my layouts are usually pretty rubbish :') )

Thanks for the story comment. I don't know what's going on with the layout. When I made ut, it loojed good, then it kept messing up. I don't know. Thanks for telling me, will try fixing it tomorrow.

Thank you for the comment on Roses :) I'm glad you liked it :D

Thanks for the comment on Snowflakes! I'll definitely fix the layout. :)

Thanks for the comment on "World Order 1".
Maybe there is someone choosing matches?
Sorry, most of my chapters are rather short.(400 - 500 words)
To a part, it may be because I'm working on keepoing the words counting. (filler words are like zeros, worthles)
I only have 2 chapters on 1500 words or above at this point. there will be more longer chapters/stories soon, once I get to posting them.
To a point, you'd need to read between the lines, in order to pick up on details.
Maybe the chapters become longer, after a few more editing attempts, which I'll go over, after a few more comments.
I guess you get into the story more with each encounter, thus see clearer, what I try to express.
Yet, I still will keep trying my best, in order to bring out the best out of every chapter.

First of all, yes all the chapters will be letters. Secondly, yeah, they're all going to be about that length. Finally, thank you for the compliments!

K, Thanks

Thanks for commenting on my story 'long live', but I'm a little confused on what you would think would make my story better. Like, you said the descriptions were odd. Could you give me an example? Honestly, I have gone back and redid those chapters so many times and i don't exactly know what people want out of it now....

Thanks for the comment on "Book of God 1".
I have the impression you prefer much longer chapters? sadly, they're in very short supply right now.
I need the constructive criticque, with more elaborate details.
If you could but take a moment to consider suggesting more concrete changes?
or just comment on the details, as you see them, while reading?
Maybe the chapter "Eponey 1" in my first story would have been more to your taste?
Longer chapters are coming later, in case you stumble across my stories again.

AHH, thank you so much for the comment on All the Little Things! (: I'm so glad there were no errors and that you like it. Thank you!

Thanks for the comment on "Xenia 2".
Since it is short, you have all the more time to focus on the small details, like comma overuse?
I guess you don't have the benefit of reading other stories, or chapters.
Can't really require you do, but it does tie back to the larger picture.
This is a new perspective of what had come to pass.
There are numerous details on which to comment, like vocabulary?
Guess you never got conected, or gfelt anyhting, then?

Thanks for your comment on The Protection of a God. I agree with you, I need a layout. I'm currently working on creating one. I've been having some difficulties trying to figure out how to make a custom one work, but hopefully there will be one soon. :)

Thanks for the comment ( The L Word)
I know the storyline is kind of common, so the cliche-ness is kind of inevitable. But I'm not going to change it to make it sound more mature or anything, but I'm trying to show a contrast in maturity between that and the sequel.
And I know the layout has nothing to do with it, but I like it =P
Thanks for liking it, if that makes sense, and maybe you could check out the sequel (The F Word) to see what happens xD

hey thanks for the comment on You've Got Mail, means a lot

Thank you for the feedback! It's much appreciated :) Do you think I should speed up the plot a little more for the benefit of making it less boring?

Thank you very much for your kind comment on my story Shadows in the Woods - I agree that I really should write a summary! Although I think I will write one for this, I am planning on using this "chapter" in a new story or at least adapting it for a new story I have in mind. I hope you will read it when I do Was there anything you particularly liked or disliked? And I'm curious as to who you think the character is or what they're like.
Sorry for the questions, I love feedback! Are you quite new to Mibba? I'm proud to be your first profile commenter