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Oh, yeah, that's what I meant when I said I wasn't trying to tell you how to write your story. That's all totally up to you; don't let me stop you from doing your own thing! I kind of got the feeling that all the sadness and sulking was just part of the style, so I wasn't trying to bash that, and I'm sorry if it came across that way.

Hey there. How have you been? Remember me? I wasPunkK!d06, but I chenged my username. I was the one that talked to you about crunkcore. How are you?

Holy shit... At least you and your siblings are away from him now.

Really?? Oh my god, why did he do that?

And did your dad ever... do stuff to him?

Oh that sux :( So whats up at the moment?

Yeah.... It's good that you're away from him now, though :P Didn't you say before that you had a brother?

Well, those bad expieriences strike inpiration like your poems. I'm not saying that how your dad treated you was right, but there's always a good side to things. It might not seem that there's light at ALL in this situation, but I think somehow, somewhere there'll be something good that comes out of it. It might not be now, it might not be tomorrow... But down the line, you'll somehow be rewarded for the shit you've put up with... But then again, you're talking to a 14 year old girl, and I don't know shit :P

Cliffhangers are always fun to leave off as, they make the reader want more. I certainly can't wait to know what happens in the next chapter.

I read your newest chapter, ^^. Gahh I love your story. lol I read so quickly it's sucks that I get through the chapter so quickly.

Yeah... I get that... I posted blogs on here about personal expieriences and my "problem" that I have and then people from my school hacked onto mibba and found me somehow... They read my blogs and then I had to face them at school... I was so nervous about seeing them I threw up at least twice before school. I thought everyone was going to call me a freak. As for the "at home drama" right now... Well, my grandfather has just turned bi-polar and he and my grandma are fighting a lot. He wouldn't start arguments if he wasn't, but what can you do? He won't go on medication for it. So since my grandparents are "fighting" my parents are fighting a little more often then they would usually do. My whole family's fucked up now, everyone's under tension and I haven't seen/talked to my grandma OR grandpa in about... I don't know... 3 months? Even though they live in my city and are a really short drive away from my house. We don't "socialize" with them anymore I guess... I miss them a lot, but you can't change it, can you? :P *sigh* But you don't get abused anymore, do you? :|

Thank you for the friend request.

thats a good reason(:
but there must be SOME reason.

random friend request!
*accepts*
may i ask why?

i know titles suck, i just tend to use lyrics/quotes until i think of something that is suitable and doesnt sound really stupid

Thanks for your comment, first im really bad at titles so i know it doesnt really fit its a quote that just came to mind when i had to title it, and it was just something i wrote in class so there isnt really chapters/paragraphs i just thought it would be fun to post it :-)

damn thats annoying, sometimes for me like only half of them load so i just click through the pages until i find ones that load but other than that i have no idea how to make custom themes else i would help sorry :-)

Hey, you mentioned you dont know how to change layouts, so if you want to change them if you go to
mibba.com/Layouts/Story
and if you find one you like you can just like click use and then select which story you want to use it on :-)

whoops I'm sorry TYPPOOO! I mean elipses. The three dot thingies. :P I will most definitely check out some of your other stories. Innocence has really caught my eye :)

Hey there, how have you been?