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    @ blades
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    Oh we fucking know what happens with Damien (some of it was the first chapter) and that's the problem.
    May 28th, 2013 at 08:58am
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    YOUR FEEDBACK IS ALWAYS THE BEST UGH
    Thank you so much for it :) we'll see what happens with our good friend Damien!
    May 28th, 2013 at 08:28am
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    Corinne definitely has a secret. What it is.... We'll have to wait and see.
    May 25th, 2013 at 01:02pm
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    thanks so much for your feedback on Witness! I have been feeling like there is some sort of disconnect between the two - I have a hard time writing transitions from being just friends where it's acceptable to not have a TON of interaction to being boyfriend and girlfriend, or somehow involved or whatever. it's definitely something I need to work on. but you're right, in this story it is a little different because he is gone a lot. and they are keeping a lot of things from each other, not that the other one really knows.

    I've just updated, just so you know!
    May 21st, 2013 at 03:43am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    I think that's a very good explanation for why you're happy Jem's not gay. It certainly makes sense. :)

    And yes, very gentlemanly of him. Go Jem! :D Thanks for commenting!
    May 15th, 2013 at 09:06pm
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Hahahhaha. You'll have to wait until the next chapter to find out how he found her!

    And technically, she did shower in the end. Hahaha. Thanks for commenting!
    May 15th, 2013 at 08:59pm
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    thank you so much for your feedback on Witness. I've just updated, if you want to check it out!
    May 13th, 2013 at 11:00pm
  • Katie Mosing

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    The only chapters that got deleted were Becca's. The others are all still there.
    May 11th, 2013 at 04:57pm
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    I'm sorry. And nope! Seems like he likes Clara, but he was just trying to hide it. :o Thanks for commenting. :D
    May 11th, 2013 at 03:10pm
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Yes, her roommate is acting like a bitch. And no, that would be too easy. ;) Thanks for commenting!
    May 9th, 2013 at 08:39pm
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    ^_^

    Oh, dear. Well, that's not that far off, right? :D You must keep optimistic. My brother gets out at the very end of June, so that really sucks for him. Hahaha.
    May 8th, 2013 at 03:53am
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    @ onlythegooddieyoung
    Brilliant.
    I'm jealous, my summer break doesn't start until like, mid-June. Stupid quarter system.
    May 8th, 2013 at 03:50am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    From the reviews, it definitely sounds like I'd like it. Hooray for summer vacation starting soon! I'll have to read it then. ^_^
    May 8th, 2013 at 03:50am
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    @ onlythegooddieyoung
    You should. There are a lot of quotable moments.
    It's rather hilarious. I think you'd like it.
    May 8th, 2013 at 03:48am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    I think it sounds like a really interesting book, actually. I might have to check it out sometime. Hahaha. I've just Googled it, and now I'm more intrigued.
    May 8th, 2013 at 02:36am
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    @ onlythegooddieyoung
    Exactly.
    Even though it sounds like a really dumb book it actually covered a lot of really important issues, like sexuality and gender and stuff.
    A+ Libba Bray.
    May 8th, 2013 at 02:29am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    ...Huh. I never really noticed that, but it makes a lot of sense, and I like that a lot. I'll have to think about it more often because no one should really have to apologize for existing.
    May 8th, 2013 at 02:07am
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    @ onlythegooddieyoung
    I just read the book Beauty Queens a while back and it had this conversation between a few of the girls and it talked about how girls always apologize and say things like "sorry for the rant" and things if they say more than like two sentences and tend to justify things by adding on "you know?" or "It's just my opinion, but..." whenever they talk.
    'like girls have to apologize for existing'
    and ever since I read that whenever I see someone censoring themselves it makes me sad.
    May 8th, 2013 at 12:26am
  • onlythegooddieyoung

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    Ahhh...that's a good point. Hahaha. I didn't think of it that way. I was just like, "Oh, I'll bore everyone, so I'll keep it brief." But I appreciate you giving me permission. ^_^ Thanks for commenting on my blog.
    May 7th, 2013 at 08:57pm
  • blades

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    you were the 100th commen on Witnesst! woo! Crazy
    May 7th, 2013 at 04:57am