Hey could you read my story, "An Artist's Love?" It's a sequel of Ninja Mania. So if you haven't read Ninja Mania could you read that and comment? Oh and they're both fan fictions of Naruto.
Aw thank you so very much for that long in depth comment on Thicker than Blood! :) I'm actually Dutch, I live in the Netherlands and so my native language is actually Dutch not English. I started learning English when I was idk, ten I think but i'm still learning everyday!
I'll check it out about the living/ living room thing. I was always under the impression that it was fine without adding the room behind it ;) Thanks for pointing it out!
So I'm off to writing chapter 38 now. Loads of action coming up. ^^
Heya! Thank you for the two very nice comments on my story! It's very appreciated but I must really warn you that I haven't finished it yet and sorta been blocked to finish it for the past... Idk five months. So if you wish to know the conclusion you'll really have to bare with me a little longer ;)