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im doing a couple more chapters and then im going to devote a whole day to revising all of it.
spell check, grammer mistakes, and the problems with the writing style
the place where i put the names and then thier dialoge was when i fell half asleep and got lazy so i had a problem writing discriptive perseptive personifications.
hey look my brains working for once!
i think im going to create a schedule for the posts. every other day. ill write while im still hyper from reading fan fic and eating whatever candy i can get my hands on. adn then revise it the next day while my brain is working and then post as soon as that part is finished. and the contest i have going on will probably take a while to really get going, so if you could pass on the word about mine it would help. ive been raving about your story to all my friends so hopefuly you can add to you list of subers. haha. really do what you want. and im sorry for the long comments!

hey, thanks for reading, commenting, and voting! :)

thats fine :]
just let me know when you want me to, and what you want!
x

Hey results are up -> http://www.mibba.com/journals/read/153615/
I have chosen you as a runner up of the top 5.
I really enjoyed your story and completely forgot to put in the results until now, you have my utmost apologies for this and I would like to offer you a runner up prize of three weeks of a story of your choice on my signature :]

like i said take your time and i looked up the halo 3 video-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h_A09O9PoSo&feature=related its called mason is addicted to halo 3 it will give you a laugh take it as a thank you for your support. and when i came up with the perv joke mason pulled i thought it was pure crap but i couldnt think of anything else so you made me very happy

thank you very much. i am going to write in word first and cut and paste.
yes english is my first language but i just got a new laptop and the keyboard is alot more compact. i was on like my 3rd day on mibba and was trying to learn BBcode and i had just gotten into fanfic and back into writing. i was on a poetry kick for a long time and im working on my writing skills. i was planning on making mason less pervy since i felt kind of wierd making that his personality since i dont actualy know him but when i read over it i changed my mind. imglad you liked that part. you can take your time on reviewing my story for sure! i dont want you to feel rushed. im going to try and get to a more important part in the story and then im going to go into word and fix all the problems with spelling and grammer and everything else you put on there. i read alot of great storys so i try and incorperate some of thier styles into my storys and i think im going to put a movie reference or a reference to something in each of my chapters and see if people can guess just for a laugh because i loved the mind ninjas refernce in the first chapter of lets just touch. "its the mind ninjas man. the FUCKING MIND NINJA MAN!"
i know thats not right but i get that spacificly stuck in my head because my friend used to do that. i can just see mason saying that the way he freakes out in the halo 3 video on youtube. i lov ethe old tour videos!!
i kind of rambling thanks again bye

you have no idea how much it means to me that your reading my story and i promise it gets better. it was one of the first things i started writing after i got out of my poetry kick. i am getting my skills back slowly but surely.
and hearing about the sequil put a smile on my face that will never die.!
( wow i really over use these things:!!! haha)

yeah haha i have read every metro station fan fic i could find and this one is by far my favorite!!! i just wish you guys would do a marathon!! that would so make my YEAR!! but i love halloween and all of its strangness so im glad too know that ill get to read that day! and 1 question well 2 sorry
1.will there be a sequel?(sry im not the best when it comes to spelling correctly!) because if its too much for you guys to handle or its because of something wrong then i would be happy to help out!!
and 2. would one of you guys check ou my story "and this is wrong but who am i to judge" its still new and it is by no means my best work but its because ive had some writers block and very minimal criticism or input.
you guys are my biggest insperation and it would be great get at least a little input or ideas!!!??? anyway im still pretty excited about the new chapters. i really do love it and the whole problem with masons abuse has me waiting on my toes for masons next pov!! im really sorry this is soo long but im sort of hyper thanx again!!!!

I know, but I liked him better sweet. ):

Lawlz, thanks, Nikki. :D

yeah that sucks ._.

That sounds so awkward. Haha. But I would have done the same thing if I was in that situation.

Haha. That would be so embarressing! Did he say anything about it?

Ohh right! Sorry I feel like a dunce now...
Thanks..=) I'm glad you like it! XD

I think now I have to do is talk myself into liking it =P

Nixxy

Haha. Nice! I don't try to be awkward, it just tends to happen. The only time that didn't happen was when I met John Ohh. I asked him for a picture then we had a deep conversation about love. Oh, and now that I think about it I did have a nice converstion with Alex DeLeon from The Cab. We talked about hookers cause I asked his merch guy for one.

It's always awkward when I meet people from bands. Like when I met Eric from A Rocket To The Moon we made small talk. Like that really awkward small talk when you talk about stupid things like the weather. Haha.

What do you mean? =P

I know, it's trash, but it was the first thing that poped into my head about litle red riding hood.
Oh well
Nixxy

same here...
it's 11 pm and i singing out loud...
Sexy Bitch by David Guetta. i cant get it out of my head..
my sis always listens to this kind of music and damn, they're all catchy songs.
i always end up singing and listening to this crappy music and i dont even know why.

Hahah, 'ello. :D I'm adrienne.

Aww thank you!
And at first all I saw was Pats face and I kinda died inside when thinking of Pat saying I was pretty. Haha.