I think it has to do with the difference between macs and pc's honestly as for the text.
But as for the details of your story, I'm a detail reader, so I notice the little things that happen in stories and often it annoys people because I can usually tell what's going to happen when a cliff hanger happens. But I like what you've done a lot.
no problem...and i do have a request...if u dont mind...how about a bergy and looch story? preferably bergy cuz hes awesome and i love him...lol...dont feel like u have 2 do this tho...i was just putting it out there since u asked
Thanks for you comment on Absolutely Still! I did a Jeff Skinner story that Tyler Seguin appears in - I agree, they are perfect foils for each other. http://stories.mibba.com/read/428878/This-Temptation/