whitewidow / Comments

Sweet! Can't wait to read it!

What could also be cool is if they like sensed an original or something, but they can't catch him/her, and so Alexis would go through a sense of depression over not meeting her own kind.

Uh, so I tried writing this damn comment on your story twice, but Mibba is being a bitch.

So just wanted to say that I am amazed you have no commenters because I pretty much just fell in love with your story. I love your concept of vampires with the perfects and originals. It kind of reminds me of Anne Rice's Queen of the Damned. Also, I love learning about Alexis' kind. I hope she can meet one of her own in the future. To be honest though, Isabel and Brian are probably my favorite characters, aside from Alexis. Their relationship is so interesting, especially with Brian's self hatred. I have a feeling that he'll become a bigger character soon, because of his relationship with Isabel and his growing interest in elves. Anyways, please update soon because this is probably one of my favorite stories on the site at the moment!