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I think if you added a bit more detail about how the main character feels towards the ignorant boyfriend of hers in the beginning, it would set a more serious tone and then by the end with the new 'teacher' would be a nice touch. So the only problem that was there was basically in the beginning as the friends converse, but near the end it was flowing slightly better.

nice to meet u too Alex :)

Oh, that's fine too. Just making it flow will be better. Good luck on that story & thanks for commenting on mine.

Thank you so much for the comment! I'm so relieved that I got a critical comment because atleast I know where to improve! Well technically, I guess it's bad that you can relate to the character but so can I :p

Thanks for the story comment :)

haha anytime c:

Thank you so much for the story comment! Yes, things are supposed to move a little fast in the first few chapters, just so I can establish the main characters, and get to the story line. Again, thanks for the comment! Means so much!

Hey how are you?

I'm glad my brothers alive, if he wasn't I wouldn't be. He's okay. He would be a ladies man if he wasn't shy

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Well I'll be taking a look at yours when it's up. I always tend to check out the stories of people I talk to (often I have to tell them to keep reminding me to read it because I always forget).
When you write something you enjoy and love, you can't go wrong. Don't be disheartened by the readers, commented and subscribers at the start. I see so many people come onto Mibba and expect to get loads of readers, then get upset and delete their story when they get one or two. They don't come straight away. I've been on here three years and I don't get a lot of readers when I post my new stuff. My old stuff, sure I might have a lot of readers but Mibba was a lot more active back then.

Haha. When you spend most of your time awake on this site, then you tend to have to find something to occupy yourself with, and I did just that. Lol.

Lol. It's the type of thing where you have to get used to it and play around. I've had three years of practice so, yeah, they're easy for me to make. x)

It's great that it fits the story, and the title never needs to be something extravagant. If you ever need help with layouts, banners, or even just someone to bounce ideas off of or anything, I'm always here (literally always on here, I have no life so I'm on mibba a lot). :)

A good title helps draw people in, as does a nice layout with a decent sized font. My first story on here had a few constant readers at the start, but it's over 50 chapters so I got more reads on it. If your story recurs in the stories section, then chances are it'll get more readers.

Haha. Alright then, develop characters. They'll help you get the plot (mine help me start and end my stories, I don't know why they all decide to die though). You could always start it as a romance but change it halfway through.

Hey ya!! Welcome to Mibba! I'm Pamy :D How are you??

Thank you :]

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i'm radha.

hello. :3