Regarding your comment on my story "Never Alone", you mention some errors. Could you maybe point them out, because I can't find them. It's not exactly helpful, as you only gave me critisism, but nothing constuctive.
Thanks for your comment and thank you for subscribing, I'm glad you like it. I will hopefully be updating it soon (but i havent started writing the next chapter yet whoops) :-)
It's a short story, it's how it was meant to be written. I've already had to explain it to someone but; He wasn't a vampire, or a real monster, in a way. It was meant to come through as a monster of a person, who destroyed a person, the last part was meant to give off the vibe that they're a cannibal.