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Tristan was rather enraged long before he returned to Aurora, and it had a lot to do with Eleanor. It wasn't written into the story, but on his way back to his chambers after his evening with Ian, Eleanor and him ran into each other. With what I intended for the whole punishment scene, I didn't intend for it to be that bad. But, things change. Yet is also shows how Tristan's jealousy is, when it comes to Aurora.

Lol, it may be cheesy, but I think it rather works. The fact that the two of them have been hiding from society for over a year, it'll be like a breath of fresh air for them, to just hold hands and walk down the street together as two lovers. And don't worry, Evey will see how Ezra and Audrey. She's actually going to move in with them once she turns eighteen, just so she can get away from Gillian.

The trip that Audrey and Ezra go on was rather fun to write. It was nice to take the two of them out of the whole secrecy bit for a small moment. I'm sure they liked it too, lol.

Haha, I'm happy you like my sex scenes.

^Bahaha, that just sounds weird, lol.

Tristan was rather enraged long before he returned to Aurora, and it had a lot to do with Eleanor. It wasn't written into the story, but on his way back to his chambers after his evening with Ian, Eleanor and him ran into each other. With what I intended for the whole punishment scene, I didn't intend for it to be that bad. But, things change. Yet is also shows how Tristan's jealousy is, when it comes to Aurora.

Lol, it may be cheesy, but I think it rather works. The fact that the two of them have been hiding from society for over a year, it'll be like a breath of fresh air for them, to just hold hands and walk down the street together as two lovers. And don't worry, Evey will see how Ezra and Audrey. She's actually going to move in with them once she turns eighteen, just so she can get away from Gillian.

The trip that Audrey and Ezra go on was rather fun to write. It was nice to take the two of them out of the whole secrecy bit for a small moment. I'm sure they liked it too, lol.

Haha, I'm happy you like my sex scenes.

^Bahaha, that just sounds weird, lol.

I'm excited for both of them.

I have the whole ending planned out for Paper Faces, and Audrey will be telling Gillian her reasoning for moving out. Ezra will be waiting outside for Audrey, and after she tells Gillian and leaves, they'll walk to his apartment, hand in hand, without worrying. I'm so excited for it, lol.

As for Passionate, Ian comforts Tristan, and even though Tristan loves both Ian and Aurora, he doesn't have to be completely around Ian to love him. The relationship Ian and Tristan share is one that was created while Ian was comforting Tristan after the child was lost.

As for the punishment that Tristan gave Aurora, he gave it to her for gazing upon Gabriel at the gala.

Gah, I hate it when it's that hot. Its too hot where you don't even feel like doing anything.

I'm still debating about the public punishment. Right now, I don't really feel like putting one in, because with where the story is going, it won't really fit. But, I'm still debating about it. I might. But I think on the other hand, it would slowly destroy Tristan. He's falling so deeply in love with Aurora. That comes all about in chapter eight, and carries over.

As for the reasoning behind Aurora being taken away from Tristan, Eleanor has a little to do with it. Her reasoning will also be explained in chapter eight also. But it also has to do with Aurora's true identity, and who her actual parents are.

As for Paper Faces, I have a sequel in the works for that one also. It's going to be set ten years after Audrey graduates. They'll have a child too. I have that all planned out. I also have it planned out with Audrey and Ezra's wedding too.

The weather's alright where I am. It's partly sunny and rather warm and muggy. How about where you are?

Lol, with what I have planned for the ending, a sequel will be in order. It'll more than likely be more tragic than Passionate, because Aurora is being taken away from Tristan at the end of Passionate. Also, because I'm making the two of them fall into love with each other, it'll only break their hearts even more. So yeah, instead of having readers bombard me, I'm going to write a sequel.

I know I just gave away the ending, I'm sorry if you wanted it to be a surprise.

It'll probably be arriving sooner rather than later. I know Passionate won't be as long as Paper Faces, not even close. If anything, it'll be twenty-five chapters at the longest, but right now I'm leaning towards twenty. I'm also still debating about writing a public punishment scene for Aurora. I kind of want to, but also kind of don't want to.

Of course I'd autograph it. In a heartbeat.

I'm really thinking of trying to get Passionate published after I'm completely done with it. Not just because of the sudden excitement over erotica, but because it really is an interesting story. I'll see how it goes, and how I feel when I complete the first draft.

And I'm also seriously considering getting Paper Faces published too.

Aww, you don't have to bow down at my feet. I'm honestly not that great. Really.

But if I ever publish Passionate and Paper Faces in physical copies (not ebooks), I will autograph them for you. That's the least I can do.

I'm happy you enjoy my stories, as we've talked previously. Because it really does show that people like my works, no matter how dark and messed up they are.

Have I told you I have a sequel in plan for Passionate Obsession? I haven't really told anyone yet, but I thought you'd like to know. But yeah, I'm planning a sequel.

Thank you once again for the comments on both Passionate and Paper Faces.

Okay, thanks for telling me.

Throughout it all, they do love each other. And really, all the ups and downs, it really makes them stronger.

There's nothing wrong with that. I actually have a friend that is a vegetarian.

Lol, don't worry about it. I ramble all the time.

I've actually been debating with myself that shortly after the funeral service and all that, of having Ezra and Audrey become completely intimate. I'll probably make them have sex though, as a sort of comfort thing.

As for making them fight again, I've been thinking about it. I want to make them as real as possible, and no couple is perfect, no matter how much they take care of each other. But anyway. I'll more than likely make them fight again, it's just over what though. That's the question.

Don't worry, I'm also a sucker for guys like Ezra. He's one of my favorite male characters who I've created so far.

Haha, well, I'm happy (even though I shouldn't be) that you caught on what I was implying involving Ezra's father. But he will die. I practically have the whole funeral portion of that planned out, I just haven't figured out where I'm going to put it. But it will also show Ezra's more vulnerable side, a side that he doesn't like to reveal.

I get what you mean about the updating two months stuff that authors do. Especially if it's a good story. That just aggravates me, but half the time the stories I'm subscribed to the author's just leave the site. It makes me sad.

Haha, your joke made me laugh.

Lol, no one will die in Paper Faces, well, other than a minor character, but that one has been sort of revealed.

As for Passionate, more than likely no one will be dying in that one. The sequel though, if I do decide to write one (which I probably will, because I have so much planned) I can't be quite sure.

I can read certain fan-fiction, but I don't read it often. It mainly has to be something that's completely different than from what it actually is in real life. And I mainly read Harry Potter fan-fiction.

And sure. Although as of right now, I might not be able to work on it often, because I'm rather engrossed with my own stuff, mainly Passionate and Paper Faces. I love Mystic, but I'm going through that phase where I want to kill off all the characters. I tend to do that a lot.

How I really do it is pay attention to the novels and stories that I read, both published and not published. Plus, I'm a sucker for detail and emotion. Take for example Anne Rice. I don't know if you've read anything by her, but she's amazing at detail and emotion in her works. Another novel that I've read that had amazing detail was The Swan Thieves by Elizabeth Kostova. One for emotion was The Dark Rose by Erin Kelly. I guess what I'm saying is reading helps, and kind of molds your own way of writing, at least it did with me.

I also look at it as I'm painting a paint, with words. I want my readers to understand how the characters are feeling, how they look, and what it looks like around them. But I also want to leave it up a little for the imagination for the readers. I don't want to completely overwhelm them with detail and no emotion, or vise versa.

As for your question about other writing sites, there's Storywrite, which I use to be on, under the same username, but I haven't used it in a while. The site got revamped, and I didn't like how it changed. I mainly did contest stuff over there anyway. Kept my chaptered stuff for Mibba. Another one that I know is fanfiction.net. I'm not on there, but I've heard it mentioned.

Of course.

What would you like help with?

Lol, that made me laugh.

And okay, that's completely your call. But I still stand by what I said in the comment. If you'd like some help, just ask.

The layouts are rather complicated. There's a tutorial, which can be found [url=http://http://www.mibba.com/Tutorials/Other/4601/Create-a-Mibba-Story-Layout/]here[/url].

It took me a while to figure it out, and I actually ended up screwing over Paper Faces layout before I changed it to the current one.

Hope the tutorial helps.

Of course.

I update like that because I have three active stories, and I want people to have time to read the chapters. I don't want them to be bombarded with ten chapters that are roughly all over four thousand words give or take. I guess I'm too generous. And it also gives me time to write the stories too, so I have quite a few chapters that aren't posted yet. Take Paper Faces for example, I have up to chapter forty-four written out, and mostly edited.

But I do understand where you're coming from, with wanting an update. I'm like that with a few stories I'm subscribed to, where the authors don't even update for a month or something.

Lol, if you want, I could help you. I don't know what you're looking for, but I can help you if you want. I'm up for it.