Thanks for the comment! I'm glad the story seems so different :) and that you enjoyed it!
August 8th, 2012 at 08:30pm
Hey thank you for reviewing my story. The main problem other than that it was written by a 16 year old are the missing italics. I should have it added soon. Thanks for your comments :) I actually started rewriting the story last night. It would mean a lot if you read The train 2.0. Its short and actually has italics like the original had at one point.
I actually give similar comments to people so I know what you mean. I was hoping to escape with a four year old story. But it absolutely needs maturing .
Thanks again. By the way the scenery OS supposed to add to the romantic scenic train. :)