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  • soupy

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    No problem! I am thoroughly enjoying your story. You have very interesting characters.

    I also appreciate the fact that you update often - it really keeps the reader engaged in the story.
    August 11th, 2012 at 12:36am
  • soupy

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    You have a really great start. I like that she is has a life on her own.

    It would be interesting to have an indication of her point of view as well.

    Keep up the good work!
    July 21st, 2012 at 03:06am
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