Wei-Wei / Comments

Your very welcome xD

Well i edited the first chapter. I messaged it to you on Facebook. I haven't worked on any of the other chapter though. I am busy trying o reconstruct my story. So i've basically erased half of it.

Psssh. She has my name and my big eyes. And she seems smart, evil, but smart. So i am officially claiming her to be my evil alter ego. (You have no say in this matter.)

And the story is really good, like the idea and your writing, but the grammar/spelling/punctuation/paragraph/formatting all needs work.

Ah, no problem! And your writing isn't bad, it's just the grammar and whatnot, you know? I think it'd really be a big help if you either got yourself a beta or something like that to point out the errors you're making, or maybe even start brushing up on grammar yourself, there's loads of sites that can help.
Good luck on your future writing endeavors! :3

Thank you for the comment on my poem :D
I'm glad you liked it (:

Thanks so much for the poem comment! It made my day.