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Hey, thank you for your comment on my story! I realized after receiving a lot of comments about it that I did not add enough description to my chapters and characters. I recently just finished updating the story with some new added details and descriptions and more movement between dialogues which should hopefully make it better. I would love it if you would check out my redone chapters! Thanks!

Hey, thanks a bunch for the comment on A Little Too Not Over You, it means a lot and I appreciate the time you took to post it. I'm happy you liked it and yes, even I want to punch the fictional Tom Logan in the face every time he comes into the story. lol

I'm so glad you're fond of my writing style. My old style had so many mistakes that I've decided to write in the way I think about my stories. I'm writing what actually is popping in my head. I'm fond of stories that have a lot of detail about things (example: Cars, Houses, Places.) I find myself seeing so many stories that say boring things like "took her to the hospital, went to the venue, had on a dress." that bores me. ANYWAYS Thank you so much for the comment :)

Hey, thanks so much for the comment on A Different Kind of Magic c: It means a lot, and I'm glad you liked it. I'm planning to update it soon :D

*guilty face*
I know my grammar sucks dick.
Always has and always will.
Well, I have been working on it. I can tell you, it's improved since my first story.

Hey, do you think that you could give my story a read? It's Avenged Sevenfold, with Jimmy as the leading character :) I'd love it if you could give me some feedback!
Thank you very much in advance, if you decide to give it a shot :)

http://stories.mibba.com/read/334698/Truest-Form-of-a-Man/

I don't get it. >.<

No I think we kinda fell out.

I DID PROMISE ;D

OMFG HOW DID YOU PIMP YOUR PROFILE OUT SO MUCH O_O

i love your taste of music avenged sevenfold to mcfly

Thank you for the comment!! The feedback is much appreciated :D

Your layout is done ^^

It's totally fine :)
If it would be at all possible do you think you can read/comment my Zacky Vengeance story, 'Asked to Compromise'? :)

It's totally fine!
Would you want the tribute photo (of Zacky, Jimmy, and Brian) as the main image? :)
And what colors did you want for your layout, black, white, and one other color :)

Okay, who is the twat that reported you, instead of simply comming and saying to you, you should change this? huh? some people are PATHETIC!
theres a comment box for a reason

Sup Honney? :)

hey! :D
can you please check out my Zacky Vengeance story called Asked to Compromise?
please read and comment?
Thank you SOOOO much if you do! :D
- God Hates Us.

I freaking love it! Your so damnd good at this !!!!! but i need more, MORE!!!!

buut i write bad stories unliek your UNREAL ONES XD
i might post it
i need to fix the grammar
its like 7 word documents long :L
al get to work on makin to good fo you ;o

okaaaaaies :D
ill look at your post now :D
i might just upload a story later :o
im not sure if i want to yet tho
its written and all i just dont like it :L
okaaaiess al be the first one to read it :P

NATALIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I LOVE YOU THE MOSTEST EVER IN THE WHOLE WIDE WORD AND EVEN MORE THAN ALLL THAT STUFF WE SAID AND JIMI HENDRIX :O
YES YOU ARE VERY DEARLY LOVED
AND WE SHALL GO RAID SHOPS FOR MORE JIMI MERCHENDISE AND BUY IT ALL AND BE LIKE HES MINESSS BIAAAAATCH! :L