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  • Airi.

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    You're welcome. (:
    June 7th, 2012 at 12:14am
  • JennyLynn2012

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    You're welcome! I think whenever you're righting a story it's good to remember that even though descriptions can bring out what a charcter is thinking or what the character is doing, it's also important to let the character themselves tell the story.
    lol...that just popped into my head right now
    June 6th, 2012 at 07:34am
  • HardlyPlastic

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    Thanks for the comment. The characters are actually based off people I know and they happen to be very rude, so I'm glad that it comes through. :) Thanks again.
    June 6th, 2012 at 07:13am
  • ParanormalcyC6

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    Thanks for your comment on my story. It made me a happy-camper lol. And I'll be sure to fix those grammatical errors soon! I just didn't notice at first I guess. Lol thanks again.
    June 6th, 2012 at 06:44am
  • william.

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    Hm, maybe. But you never know. We might just prevail. xD
    June 6th, 2012 at 06:43am
  • william.

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    Alas, we are in the 'I don't have a brain' generation. -sighs-
    June 6th, 2012 at 06:27am
  • Em'ly

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    I'm so glad I got to read that story. I also realized I forgot to subscribe, so I'm off to do that now! :)
    June 6th, 2012 at 06:22am
  • LoveForGiraffes

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    thanks so much for your lovely comment =] <3
    June 6th, 2012 at 06:05am
  • william.

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    Nah, it's fine. I did think of all the words in it though, normally people in my age range from my school barely knows what half of those words I put into my stories mean. xD
    June 6th, 2012 at 06:04am
  • Kovoumakesmetingle

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    Welcome
    June 6th, 2012 at 05:54am
  • william.

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    Yeah, I'm kind of a really repulsive guy. Aha. xD
    June 6th, 2012 at 04:49am
  • william.

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    Aha, yeah, that was one of my stories I didn't get anyone to help me edit. ^^'
    I kinda just decided it was good enough, but thank you.
    June 6th, 2012 at 04:40am
  • william.

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    Aha, but yeah, I don't really care if you work on it or not. It was just things I as a writer dislike in writing. ^^'
    June 6th, 2012 at 04:20am
  • william.

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    I truly isn't a problem. c:
    June 6th, 2012 at 04:18am
  • william.

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    Yeah, I'd just like to apologize if it sounded like douchie-ness, I'm not a douche I'd like to promise you. ^^
    June 6th, 2012 at 04:14am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    Thank you; I hope it does. I'm still experimenting with my writing. You're welcome. (:
    June 6th, 2012 at 04:01am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    Thank you very much for your comment on my story "Down Into The Lake." To be completely honest, it use to be a three-shot. However, once I decided to turn into a full length story, I didn't want those three chapters to be the first or second or third chapter. I felt that they would be better merged into one chapter and call it a preface; a lead up to my story. But who knows, I might reconsider. Anyways, thank you, your comment is greatly appreciated.

    P.S: So far I've only read the first chapter of Blight, but I think it's very interesting and I can't wait to read the other chapters, including the ones you add in the future.
    June 6th, 2012 at 03:26am
  • orange county.

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    I'm going to quote you to prove you wrong.

    "I'll probably be on until 3 in the morning again."

    Again? That's not a healthy sleeping pattern. Tut, tut. lmfao
    June 6th, 2012 at 03:17am
  • orange county.

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    I was on for about 11:00am it's now 2:08am over here. But I still don't want to sleep. I'm too buzzed. From lack of sleep.
    June 6th, 2012 at 03:09am
  • orange county.

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    It was kind of an accident but I'll take the thanks (and the high-five) anyway. I have actually been typing on and off for like 14 hours. Oh my god. What is wrong with me? I updated two stories and have just been on Mibba all day. I'm so obsessed. I suppose all the reading during the comment swap would have cooled them down though. They're just bright pink.
    June 6th, 2012 at 02:56am