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yay!! thank you SO much for the deadly comment!!!

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The one where Mikey is a man whore? It's called Deadly Romantic its on here!

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Lol thanks. Im not used to getting congrat on gettin engaged anymore. Been engaged for over a year!
God, yeah its annoyin. I love it when you know for a fact the actual person is NOTHING like the character. Like in one of mine Mikey is a total man whore. It's brilliant! He has a different girl every night, and he's very witty. He insults people when they're not expecting it & most times its below the belt!
Also, in I love it when the girl has commimment problems. Normally its the guy running a mile a minute, I love to see it when the girl doesn't wanna know.

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lol I wouldn't go as far as saying NOTHING happens when you get married! lol. im gettin married in a couple of years! But it's nothing worth reading about. I mean, if i wanna know what its like with a married couple I can just look at my own life - the only thing missin is the bit of paper & saying "I do"
It just really annoys me! I mean, guys in bands are engaged for years before they get married! They don't have the time - and it's not real! you can tell its some 13year old girl that dreams of gettin married to a rock star! so much that she's even found her wedding dress! hell, im gettin married for real & i dont even know what my wedding dress is going to look like!

Grr! It's annoying!

But, if I was writing your script, I'd totally let Brian found out she's still on drugs, but he's already fallen in love with his son, therefore he can't kick her off the tour! What does he do then!! lmao! If you don't use that idea - when i get time im totally using it! maybe in a different context but totally using it! lol

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And be boring! It really gets on my nerves! Just what ever you do...don't let them get married! and find photos of the dresses...cz it's pointless...and annoying! lmao! But if they do get married...have something really, REALLY bad happen! hmm...actually...I think I'm getting an idea for another fic...lmao! Argh! I have too much happening. I haven't got time for another script!

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That really annoys me! Like I started reading this amazing, really well written MCR fic...it got to like chap 14 and I thought this sounds really familiar. I got to chap 17 and realised its just like an A7X one! Frank was a slut & Gerard tried to stop him...Frank being Brain & Gerard being Zacky. It was really annoying, espically since the A7X one had been a 3 shot! How can anyone expand on a 3 shot!?

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Its okay! I really like it!

OKay...well most stories I read on here are A7X ones...and the list is pretty long! (Over a page!) So...most stories I read tend to be either they fall madly in love & get married...I tend to stop reading these! They piss me off! lmao!
But other ones the girl hates Brian and he keeps following her about. Or she really, really likes him and he doesn't realise it.

And thats about it really! lol

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no problem :)

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It's really good, keep it up.

no prob its amazing as is your background on your profile

oh man.
i'm the same way.
i'd kill for advice and criticism over my stories.
i love it cause then you know exactly what to do to improve it and make it better...worth reading lol.

yay! i'm uber glad you could use it.
and not to mention glad you didnt freak out lol i was thinking 'oh god she's gonna think im a bitch' lol

but i do like your story alot. you're talented. ^.^

Anytime =]