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Well, there are Nine Circles of the Alighierian Hell.

Limbo - For those who did not sin, but did not have the required faith to enter Heaven
Lust - For those who gave into the pleasures of the flesh
Gluttony - For those who gave into the pleasure of self-indulgence
Avarice and Prodigality - For those who hoarded and squandered wealth in life
Wrath and Sullenness - For the ever angry and ever sulky
Heresy - For those who believed contrary to the fundamental tenets of a religion they claims to belonged to
Violence - A circle divided in three parts, one for those who were violent against people and property, the second for those who committed suicide, and the third for blasphemers
Fraud - For those who were guilty of deliberate, knowing evil
Treachery - For the backstabbers

Haha, I just noticed you like Spinal Tap
- Look... still has the old tag on, never even played it.
- [points his finger] You've never played...?
- Don't touch it!
- We'll I wasn't going to touch it, I was just pointing at it.
- Well... don't point! It can't be played.
- Don't point, okay. Can I look at it?
- No. no. That's it, you've seen enough of that one.

No problemo dude!

So, I been missing you around this fair Mibba's of ours... Just thought I'd let you know.

Okay, so I have this questionnaire about "Imprisoned" I've been sending to people... want it?

Haha, that is no problem! Are you kidding, I'm just happy you comment at all, who cares about a timely manner.

Have fun in San Fran! And I cannot wait to see what you have when you get back!

Okay, so guess who just posted TWO (count 'em, two) new chapters on Imprisoned? Me! And no worries, the second was totally worth the wait...

I was spending a little refreshing my memory of all the stories I've read (coughProcrastinatingcough) and came across an odd story by the name of "Behind the Searcher," Ever heard of it? Nah, of course not! Okay, so what's up with you? I haven't gotten a comment from you in a bit, so I said to myself, "Kayzi, you should comment." Of course, I just had to agree.

ANYWAY, how's it going? Hopefully nothing's happened or anything, because I so direly want your comments on the newest chapter of "Imprisoned". Of course that's not the only reason. I think that "Behind the Searcher" thing is another.

Haha, its just the name of one of my favorite Raidohead songs :P
You should give it a listen, its a right great song!

Well, thank you Ollie!
Haha, can't ever get enough of good music :D

Hah, well thank you.
I'm Guili :] (It's pronounced Juile, btw, my parent's just spelt it odd :P)

Guess who got so caught up writing her own chapter she forgot to read yours! Me! Okay, so my next chapter is up. It's a little shorter, but I love it. God gave me a real peace about the last one, and I'm so glad to have this one up. Oh, I'm so excited to see where my writing buddy takes this one!

P.S. I will get to reading that as soon as I can, sorry for the wait!

Funny you mention that. I'm actually writing a scene where Dr. Bane attempts to-- actually, you'll just have to wait and see.

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Well, I've got a sort of peace about it now. I've kinda got the next chapter in the works, in my head at least. I'm glad you like it, writing excruciating pain scenes is always a very tricky business. I love how two-face MIchael is too... Haha, makes me laugh, cause I know what he's up to.. Well, I guess you guys kinda do too...

OF COURSE! I would love to read what you've got so far. The master plan too, if you're willing! I know how helpful it is to have someone else on the inside. I mean, I know I can't read my own writing well, because I imagined it, so I have a defined sense of... well everything. While, when you read someone else's work, you get you're own version, so the openness is a plus. ANYWAY if you wanna message me something, I will be HAPPY to read it, and you know, tell you my mind and such.

Okay It's up. I'm fighting off hating the thing, but it's up. Grrr....

Awwwww! Thanks. No worries, unless I decide to rewrite the thing, it should be up soon! And even with a rewrite, it should be up by tomorrow night. I'm really glad you like it... your support means a ton.

Hey... Where's the next chapter of your story???

Awww... I love Stryker. Not the name, but I think he's turning out to be an awesome character. I'm just worried about the balance between guilt, anger, hatred, and inner turmoil... That's what I think is struggling with this newest chapter. He's turned into a little fighting machine, if I may say so myself... Oops, spilled some beans about the next chapter, haha! I can't wait to get this new one up, it should be interesting.

Scratch that, I've taken that chapter down... I'm gonna suck it up and add the piece I want onto it... Eh.. And try and get in tune with my writing buddy a little more. It seemed strained... Anyway, it will probably be back tomorrow morning.

Guess who's foggy minded, has an unfinished charcoal of a Faun, and just posted another chapter? I don't actually feel as good about this chapter... I guess I had just planned to keep the next piece a part of this chapter, but it seemed like it would be too long.. I don't know. You're opinion would be appreciated!