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@ screammusic
Hhahaha I just had to do something with him ORIGINALLY he was gonna be after Jayleene to so like Big Cat vs. Drama I'd thought that would be interesting

<3 Personally, I say YES! Just re-read the chapter, because there's one pharagraph (i think its the last full-ish one) that's a little confusing. But really: this is amazing! I still cant get over the Big Cat part haha he'd be so awkward!

@ screammusic
Aww thanks!:D means a lot !<3 so should I keep it the same then ?

Oh. My. GOSH! Dude I dont even know why youre freaking out! That twist is AMAZING! and the Big Cat part is pretty hilarious :) but if youre still freaking i have a suggestion. I get really nervois on how good my writing is so i go back and read the chapters. From the beggining. It shows you the readers POV, how the plot is unraveling, and any grammar mistakes. But honestly: you are kicking some serious ass with this story!

@ screammusic
Hahah okay I'm about to update in a couple minutes the y&r chapter I'm so lost I have no ideas but tell me if you hate it !;) aha idk what else I make of it there has to be a problem in the story right? Well I made one up but it sucks.. Please help I dont mind at ALL changing the chapter really I just need help:O pleaseD: aha Idc If I have to delete the whole chapter! I just REALLY need help haha that's how desperate for help I am right now... I'll mention you in the comments if you want and give you credit haha idk what else to do...

Wow that sounded desperate as hell haha but idc I need the help:P

:D thought so

@ screammusic
Hehe I meant to put love:D....

That makes me super happy :)

@ screammusic
Okay(: and welcome !<3 I really low the story though :D

Hah well try :) thank you for commenting on Daughter of Dyrdek!!!!