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Thanks for the friend request! How's your break so far?

Hey! Thanks for the friend request
How's it going?

@ Emo_Drama_Dork

Sounds like an excellent idea ;) I'll get right on it

So, I just read the new chapter of "The Girl Who Made A Choice" and re-read "So Much For Sweet and Innocent" (can you tell I have no life?) and I really want to see a smutty Doctor/Smith story. Smut for the sake of smut is always fun and you are an AMAZING writer. Meh, just a thought.

Thank you for your comment on "Falling For Forbidden". I will be taking your advice into consideration.

Thank you very much for your story comment. :) The story's main focus isn't on You Me At Six, so you won't have to worry about that. I've noticed they're losing fans. :o I don't know why. haha. But I don't keep up with the media, I just listen to the music. So in reality I wouldn't know. But thanks so much again. The story's main focus is on T.Mills and Bella.

Thank you so much for commenting on Sick, I'm actually thinking of continuing with short chapters because I really like the concept I've created. ;slkfja;sdlfkj

I respect your opinion because everyone is entitled to their own opinions. As for the grammar and spelling errors, I had thought that I had caught most of them, but the first few chapters were before I started having someone pre-read and edit the chapters for me. As for Darren's portrayal, if you keep reading, you'll see why he acted the way he did. And people have really liked how I've portrayed him in recent chapters. I agree that my first few chapters are rough, but I honestly have just been writing this week by week so I feel that I've much improved in the past eight months since I started writing my story. The same goes with Kaley's character. She has developed a lot since I started. I think that if you continue to read the story, that you might find yourself pleasantly surprised :)

@ blasttyrant
Thank you so much

Honesty think you've grown so much as a writer. It's so good!

@ blasttyrant
Of course my love, what do you think of the slightly newer version? I'm doing so much more with it now

So I doubt you remember me, but I had a Captain America fic that I was working on this summer called My Saving Grace. You had commented on it a while ago and I've finally got it up and running again! Also, I'm reading Only an Echo. Kinda in love :)

Adore your username.

Thanks for the comment on my story. :D
Actually, when you comment swap, your story automatically goes to another user that wants to comment swap. So you don't really need to let people know what story it is that you want. But I love captain america so I'll check it out anyway. ^.^

Thanks for the comment on my story, I'm glad that you like it still.

@saudade.
Listen kid, I'm not going to argue with you. Of course it has flaws, it's a One Direction story so take it on a site that Mibba has actually built for the band.

@ TARDISblue
Then you must not have read the story because the main characters haven't even met yet. So how is the time line too fast? Harry hasn't met the girl, he's met a kitten. I've proofread and I've had other people take a look at it as well so I really can't see what you're talking about unless you show me an example.

@ saudade.
You can't make two people see each other and immediately think, "Shit, I love her, I must see her again!" It isn't realistic, that's Romeo and Juliet. And no one wants to read a chapter that's 800 words, it gets effort after a while when you've read four separate chapters all about the same thing.

@ TARDISblue
The time line and pace is purposive. Life is fast, things happen. Even if it's apparent to you where things are flawed, it's not so much to me. I don't see how the length of the chapters and the speed of events makes the story itself flawed.

@ saudade.
The advice was to change these things, it was everywhere not just in certain parts of the story. I did also say the time line was too fast, that way you can go back and edit in more detail and slow it down a little more. It's not that hard to explain.