Good call. Thanks for the comment. Did comment swap bring you there? (The comment looked over 200 words) If it did, then it worked and thanks for reading my story. And, yes, layouts ate over rated. But yeah, thanks for reading it because I know how it feels to get something on comment swap that you're not intrested in. If you didn't find the story on Comment Swap, then thanks for picking my story, I don't get much readers on any of my stories.. Well, thanks again!
Thanks for the story comment :) I do try to include lots of twists, so I'm glad you spotted those. Don't worry, there will be more suspense before this story is finished :D