slabear / Comments

well the way i see things in my head is how i want other people to see them so i really try to describe things as much as possible and i don't think like "he passed the puck to this guy.. and back to this guy" is really a description. I wanted to get hockey into it because it's about hockey. The whole Alex apology thing got me, really. i heard the song and thought of them while i was writing it and i wrote the whole scene before i went back to read it. I played the song while reading it and just bawled my eyes out. lmao. it's going to be better when i get a chance to rewrite, though. i promise. there's just a bunch of errors i've found and i'm just like "ew" haha which is the reason why i'm rewriting.

i wouldn't dream of writing about any other team. i couldn't do it. i love my capitals too much. i'm definitely going to re-write this one first, and then most likely a sequel. i miss that story wayyy too much.

oh my goodness you beautiful, wonderful hockey fan, you!
honestly, i think it's poorly written, but your comment makes everything better!!
don't sob! NO TEARS!
i think i'm going to re-write this soon, and there might be a sequel or something. i haven't decided yet. so keep looking!