It's okay. I like it a lot that you love my story a lot. It's people like you that have me continuously writing it. I might have given it up a long time ago.
Well, I like it a lot because it isn't just another story where two people fall in love and all that jazz. :p
I really liked the beginning, when she first sees her brother doing drugs. It just seemed so real, even if it wasn't so descriptive or even that long. I actually like that it isn't the longest story ever, because sometimes too much, and I can't concentrate on all of it. It's unique, definitely. The only thing I can think to add, is maybe add a bit more family history, such as other memories with her brother. Otherwise, it's great. :]
I find that I like the characters in original stories much more than I do in fan fictions.
and in fan fiction, people don't really aim towards reality. You know what I mean? it's more a long the lines of, "while lurking atl's bus after their concert, i met alex gasskarth and we had sex after i told him i was his biggest fan and then i got preggo and he and i got married and then he cheated on me and i dumped him but then took him back because hes so sexy.'
you know? :P
original writers usually have a stronger grasp on reality.
Awwwe, thankyou!
I'm glad you enjoy the story.
It's going to end soon, probably.
Like, less than fifteen chapters, I imagine, but there will be a sequel.
:D
I hope you don't mind that I changed the banner in my story. I wanted the road to be more Arizona, desert-like. But I put your banner there still because it was really awesome of you to make it for me! (:
I'm glad you liked it. :)