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Hi, thank you for commenting on my story Early Sunsets Over Monroeville! You mentioned that the sentences were choppy? I'm not very familiar with what that means or how to fix it, so do you think you could me some pointers on that?

Hey I'm so glad that you like it! Lol that made me giggle too. Do you have any suggestions about the I? I couldn't think of another way because it's present tense and ings take away from flowingstories. They disrupt the flow a bit.
this is a rewrite of my other story the train feel feel free to check out the difference. Although the train may give away some details of the train 2
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Thanks for commenting!

Thank you so much for your comment on Invincible! I know it's confusing right now but in a couple of chapters everything will start to make perfect sense. :P But anyways, thank you so much !

Thank you very much for the story comment :)
Yeah, I don't like the Jonas Brothers either, as weird as it sounds xD

Hi! Thanks for mentioning me in your author's note section! it caught me off guard but its really sweet of you! made my day! <3

Hey, thanks for your comment on 'All I Wanted' - both nice for me to read and also useful - I have corrected the minor mistake and also sorted out the paragraphs in the final chapter, so thanks for the heads-up about those :) Anyway, thank you very much for your comment; it made me smile

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