Haha, no problem. :) I always try to give every type of story a chance no matter how interested or disinterested in the fandom I am. I've found some real gems in fandoms I don't even belong to. <3
I'm glad you like them. Yeah, that eighth line flows better now. =] haha. Yeah, "My Star" is write the unusual topic. Most people don't write about the fan-idol love, but it came out really well, and I'm happy with it.
Thanks for the comment on my story. :) I like your idea to make the story longer...but I've decided to write it in drabbles which are 100 word stories...;p
Although, I think I might stop it somewhere, make a sequel where it's all long chapters. :) Keep reading, because it will eventually get so intense. :)
No problem! The layout maker is fairly easy to use, or it was on the old mibba, haha! I haven't had much experience with the new one, so it might be slightly different.
Thanks bunches. Funny, I was sitting there staring at that word and I was thinking that it was frustrating because it just didn't feel right, either. I'm glad I wasn't the only one. I changed that line a little too. . And I've always found poetry to be easy. Most of my poems are sad, but I love a lot of them. I think my favorite though is "My Star". It's one of the happier ones. lol. "Gone" is also a favorite of mine.
Thnks for the comment on my poem "Ease". Yeah, I noticed that I was losing the rhythm in the last verse. I kept getting distracted adn I was like "damn!" because I hadn't been inspired to write for almost six months or so. >///< I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I know what you meant by "pretty but not". lol. ;]
Thanks so much for your comment on Quell! Go buy the books right now, they're seriously so good. Just a warning, I literally could not put them down. I stayed up all night just to finish Catching Fire. But. So. Worth. It. Enjoy! :D
Thank you for your comment and for your advice! It's greatly appreciated. I'll make sure to italicise the first-person thoughts more now. I had forgotten to put the bb-code tags when I posted the chapters, but I'll fix them right away. :D
Oh no don't worry, I must've skipped the bit where he mentioned a walk or something xD or maybe I wasn't paying attention. Aww thank you, I can't wait for your next chapter :)