@ PlightOfSins Well what I would do is change the title :x I know that'd be kinda dumb, but they're not so shy anymore. The story has changed A LOT since the beginning, and they've grown to be so full of courage, especially Les. Something to make would be end it right before after Angelo proposes, and before they go to warped. Then make a new story a couple of weeks into warped :o But that's just my opinion
@ iShotTheSheriff1313 I actually have a question. If you could take something out of the story what would it be? and if you could make it so that there was more of something in the story, what would it be?
Hey thanks for reading/commenting/recommending my story. I had 13 chapters prewritten and my computer crashed and deleted them all so I am in the process of rewriting. Sorry to keep you waiting and thanks again :)