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@ dreamon
no prob.

@ Ayana Sioux
Thank you very much, Ayana.

@ dreamon
Haha, oh, well, I'm happy to be the first.

@ Ayana Sioux
Thank you very much, I don't think anyone has ever said something so sweet to me!

Aw, you're pretty. I imagined you looking more average.

@ Ayana Sioux
Yes, ma'am, it is.

Is that a picture of you in your avatar?

@ el3ctric
Thank you do much!(:

Hey, I really like your writing!

@ WhenTheLeveeBreaks
Aww thank you so much(: I usually write them on a whim based on what kind of day I'm having, haha(: I know I haven't written any in awhile, but this week has been packed! Thanks a bunch for your feedback, and I hope to be writing more soon(((:

Hello! I just wanted to say that I love every single one of your poems. They are like little vignettes of awesomeness. I love that they're short and to the point, and meaningful as well. Anyway, thanks for writing them, you're very talented! :)

@ Ayana Sioux
Alright c: thanks a bunch for the advice! I'll try to get around to it, soon. Trust me, any advice is always welcome!

Hey, I want to help you get more readers on your story so I'm going to give you a suggestion. You don't have to follow it if you don't want, of course.

But almost all the popular stories on the website are spaced twice so it won't look like blocks of text. I hope I'm making sense. Basically, all the stories are written like this

EXAMPLE:
There was a boy that I once knew named Cornell and he was very attractive.

"How are you today, Cornell?" I would ask him every morning. He would always look at me and smile his usual sly smile that was always mysterious to me.

"Fine. What about you?" Our conversations never changed, even if we wanted to talk about something different, we never felt it was necessary.

[instead of this]
There was a boy that I once knew named Cornell and he was very attractive.
"How are you today, Cornell?" I would ask him every morning. He would always look at me and smile his usual sly smile that was always mysterious to me.
"Fine. What about you?" Our conversations never changed, even if we wanted to talk about something different, we never felt it was necessary.

But yeah, that's one of many ways. I hope you take the advice because I really think it will help you.

@ Ernest Hemingway
I loved it! That's awesome, that's how most of my poems come about. Aw, thank you so much! c:

I'm so glad you liked my poem! I actually just wrote it on a whim last night. I plan on reading some of your poems, too!