How's it going? :XD
I have a complete story and I need feedback on that one so,
here's the link if you have time and you wanna check it:
http://stories.mibba.com/read/421101/Broken-hearts-and-bottles/
I'm sorry for taking so long to get back to you. I was having Internet issues. Anyway, all I really mean is starting a new paragraph after someone's dones speaking.
I think it should get MORE comments cause of that... i mean your story was a lot more enjoyable than twilight... plus your story had sex and that makes ever story more enjoyable! lol