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  • formerlyknownas

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    Haha I'm working on reviving it!
    July 7th, 2010 at 11:25pm
  • satellite mind.

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    Well, jeeze. Haha.
    I teared up a bit reading that!
    Thank you [i]so[/i] much. I really, really appreciate it.
    I'm so glad you like it. :D
    June 27th, 2010 at 10:04pm
  • erratic

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    Aww, shucks!
    I'm stoked that you liked so many aspects of the chapter.

    I knew that Alex and Chloe's getting-back-together kiss would have to be special, so I spent a lot of time figuring out how it would happen. I'm pretty happy with the end result :)

    The soundproofed basement came in handy because Zooey didn't wake up during her nap, but Rian was able to hear the guitars falling when Alex forgot to close the door. At first, I didn't want anyone to interrupt, but then I realized that it would be kind of awkward for Alex and Chloe to explain how they ended up back together. lol.

    Haha. The BMTH bit seems to be very popular. Since the chapter was really cheesy, I had to throw in some humor to even it all out.

    Once again, thank you so much for the feedback!
    I really REALLY appreciate it.
    A LOT.
    June 21st, 2010 at 05:50pm
  • semisweet

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    Thank you so much for the story comment! I'm really glad you liked the update, and that you stuck around even after all that time. I really appreciate it. I promise I will try to get the next one out in a more timely manner...haha. :]
    June 20th, 2010 at 05:45pm
  • erratic

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    ANTM is a good choice. I love Miss J :)
    June 16th, 2010 at 07:29pm
  • formerlyknownas

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    Awh thanks! :) I thought it would be a nice touch if he kissed her on the cheek first. I love kisses on cheeks. I think they're so much more than some people give them credit for.
    June 14th, 2010 at 03:52am
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    I love Snoopy!
    June 9th, 2010 at 09:24pm
  • erratic

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    Aww, thanks for commenting.
    Charlie sounds lovely. Does he have floppy ears?
    June 9th, 2010 at 07:00pm
  • erratic

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    I'm glad you caught the TSL reference :)
    California hold a lot for Chloe and Alex, but you'll have to keep reading on order to find out how it all unfolds.

    Thank you for the comment!
    May 7th, 2010 at 08:19pm
  • Earl Of Slander

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    Ah, that was the reaction I was hoping for :P
    Thank you for commenting, and I'm glad you enjoy it!
    The ending will be great, I promise :)
    April 2nd, 2010 at 10:45pm
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    Awe, I'm so glad you liked it!
    Thank you so much for reading. :D
    March 14th, 2010 at 04:42pm
  • formerlyknownas

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    It's kind of on hiatus right now. I haven't had much inspiration for it, really. :/
    March 14th, 2010 at 04:17pm
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    I'm really glad that you liked that quote. I highlighted the things that I think really make a relationship, so I'm glad that you appreciated that. :)
    March 1st, 2010 at 03:40am
  • DahliaJade

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    I'm glad you enjoyed the mishap between John Ohhhh and Lullaby. It's nice to write a little slapstick every now and again, and it seems like people were actually amused, so that's ace, I'm stoked.

    It's such a compliment for Sam to say Lullaby is a mix of Lux and Hummingbird, but to have someone else agree with her..that's crazy. I loved Lux and Hummingbird so much and, aw man, I just don't know what to say.

    Garretts got a little puppy love for Lullaby I think, yeah.
    x
    February 8th, 2010 at 03:40pm
  • formerlyknownas

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    You're gonna luuuurve Kyle, haha that's all I gotta say. ;)
    February 6th, 2010 at 05:08pm
  • formerlyknownas

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    Haha well it's a back-and-forth kind of story. There's gonna be one chapter of the past, like a memory, and one chapter of what's happening now. So the Friday chapter won't be until chapter four. ;)
    January 24th, 2010 at 05:04pm
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    I love writing Grayson and Hummingbird. Or I guess I should say loved, now that it's over. Which is so weird, btw. Like, I'm still getting used to the idea of it haha. Grayson is probably my second favorite. It's going to sound weird, but Schuyler has been my favorite from day one. She was just fun to write.

    And boys aren't just girls in those situations, they're also terribly obvious. I swear, boys don't have a "subtle" mode lol.

    I love sap too, but I hate when I read back over things and it seems really cheesy. That was why I put in the Days Of Our Lives part, haha.

    I'm glad you liked the ending!
    January 17th, 2010 at 08:37pm
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    Her dad is very flawed, they all are. But that's his personality. Of course he's going to come storming in, he doesn't care whose house it is, especially when there's some teenage hooligan trying to tell him about his daughter.
    January 12th, 2010 at 08:40pm
  • formerlyknownas

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    Haha well I wouldn't say "love" but you're pretty close, I think.
    January 11th, 2010 at 07:23pm
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    I might make it a chaptered story once I finish Afire and Lights. It'd probably be a short story if anything. I'm glad you liked it! :)
    January 8th, 2010 at 06:19am