Fuck You Mibba / Comments

Ah that sucks, I'm taking a class independently too and I'm pretty far behind haha :/ But yeah I know how that is, I love writing and it sucks having no time!

Thanks :) I have very low self confidence so I often feel as though I did something completely stupid haha fun... Any who, I totally understand, I have this story I'm working on that isn't going well at all lol I go to an "alternative school" that's part online and part on campus, though I think you can just do online, but I keep getting behind so I haven't had any time to work on it, and now family's coming up... Maybe Spring Break I'll be able to get to it? Lol!

No you don't come off like that, don't worry :). And ah yes my story... it's quite rough but if you want to read it feel free haha :) I haven't had time to work on it in a while unfortunately

You're welcome :) I worry that I come off as a bit "Know it all", I don't mean to if I do, I'm just trying to lend some advice. I will also probably comment on more of your works, I was going to do your story but I've been really bust lately, that's why I just did the poems. Your criticism is also appreciated, and if you have anything more specific you want me to comment on (instead of a bunch all at once) let me know :)

Thank you very much for you comments on my poems. I apologize for the lateness of this response; this weekend has been very busy for me! :/ Once again, your criticism was immensely helpful and constructive. I will definitely keep your advice in mind for my upcoming poems. :)

-John