jedi123 / Comments

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed them, pal-o-yours! I like your story as well! The suspense is monumentous, and I can't wait to read Chapter 1!

Dear Pal-o-mine,
I have been reading your poems and they are quite humerous .)
From,
Pal-o-yours

*Sorry! I had meant step dad! I know sometimes it's a touchy subject, and I didn't mean to offend you or anything!

:D You're welcome! And that's really neat you and your dad have creative writing contests! I wish my family did something like that, instead of sleeping until one in the afternoon.

Thank you haha c: I was going to change it and make it more descriptive and stuff but I decided I should keep it the way I finished it in my fifteen minute time limit. Changing it would have been cheating haha d: