haha awe thank you
And don't feel intimidated, I don't care who starts out at the beginning or not. I'm just glad that people like the story. Thanks again!
I'm going to start working on a sequel soon I think.
-Lyss
Thank you for the comment
I'm glad you like the story
I know what you mean, with the errors and such. It seems that most fanfics have absolutely no plot (unless you count chapter after chapter of sex)
But thanks again
I'm really glad to get some response. I can see people reading it, but a lot of people don't take the time to comment.