ninjabones / Comments

Thank you for the comment on Fixed in the Shadows. It's always nice to get new ideas from fellow writers--it's one of the reasons I post my stories. I'll make sure to check that I'm not using "then" too much. I like my stories to be sort of cliché with dark themes. That's just how I roll! Hehe. Thanks again though!

Thank you for your comment on my story, The Lover & The Liar. I suspect you were given the fiction through the comment swap feature, as I cannot imagine that you would have read it by choice - I have looked at some of your writing and it is clear we have different tastes and directions. Your criticisms would be helpful to me if I were to take the one shot, or exerpt, and create a full length fiction. As the story was marked as 'complete', you may note that this was not my intention. The idea of not giving any background (how Craig and Chelsea met, how Craig's addiction started etc) was to create mystery and suspense leading up to the climax of the exerpt. I am saddened to read that you do not feel that this was conveyed particularly well, though I feel that as the story is a fan-fiction, other fans of Craig and his work would beagle to appreciate the situation. Thank you again for taking the time to provide your feedback.

thank you for your feedback on my story Heavy Heart. Seriously, the constructive criticism helps so much. I'll go back and take a look at your points and make some changes!