Coruja Do Vampiro / Comments

its okay a bit hectic but fun still the same! so do anything fun this summer?

your welcome so how is life?

hi! love the page reading ur story! PS *SCREAMS SECRET!! MCR IS KICK BUTT!!!*

Don't worry, I love your story way to much to stop reading and commenting it. I've just been really busy. I'm actually leaving for Europe for two weeks tomorrow. I'll read the sequel when I get back though.

Well, I don't think you've missed much from me. I started a new story and I've just stopped updating Our Secret Love because I got bored of it and thought a hiatus was in order. =]

Heya Missy!
Remember me?! LOL
Anyways... remember that story I was going to do? The sequel to yours...?
I'VE STARTED!!!
I've written the first chapter and I hope you like it.
I have a favour to ask you... if you could send it around or recomend it in YOUR NEXT UPDATE *cough* then that would be great. :D
I hope it's ok...

Chocolate Werewolf Over and Out! *Hee Hee*

Lol yeah. I'm happy cause school doesnt start for me till 1130 this week, so I get to sleep. YAY! new update. : ]]

lol. Oh, so I just reread your newest chapter, and I guess when i read it the first time I was more tired then I thought when I first read it, cause it all made sense to me this time. :]

lol. I just wrote a paper in french. And i gotta say, i dont know how people write full stories in a different language from their native..
Oh, while i was reading the latest chapter of your story, there was a word/ phrase (im assuming its a phrase stupid americans like me dont use) that I didn't know what it meant. If I have time i'll reread it and then ask you what it meant. But I was really tired when I read it last night, so maybe I wasa just being an idiot. Oh well, we'll see if I'm stupid..

hah yeah. exams suck. im counting down the days till school is out. only 36 days that i have to go to school. WOO! hah, i've posted comments on my own profile before too. ://

thank you for commenting my story a while back :) I finally got around (bad for me) to thanking my readers individually instead of as a group.

Thank You =]

oh, im sorry, that sucks. ://
okay, its fine, i can be paitent. I have exams this week, Grrr.

haha. i love you to, in the non in love way. :p your story is amazing, it deserves comments. :] i hope u get the update out soon. but i wont kill you or anything if you dont. i know life is busy.

WOAH!!!
Somits WRONG!!! SOMITS WRONG I TELL YOU!!!
Are you feeling OK? lol
Hows the UPDATE coming along? You better be working on it unless you want me and your subs to KICK YOUR BUTT!!! :P
Luv ya really, lovie! How you been anyways? I just had an art exam today... In TOTAL SILENCE! It was agonising... but we ended up talking by the end anyways... making my project thing though was fun... I got to play with hot wax (which was sented... I made sure of that... and you could smell it all through A Block! It was great!)
Speak to you soon, lovie.

Wolfie x

OMG!!!!
I want more..NOW! I loved it FAR to much... But hey....that's what I DO!
Oh dear... I seem to be a little HYPER! Ah well.... Would'nt be me if I wasn't.
You know you love me... PLEASE DO MORE.
The Chapter was GREAT... but, as usual, here are your mistakes/problemie bits:
1. Even when he looked LIKE DEATH WARMED UP he was putting others before himself = CONFUZZLING
2. contemplating my actions in too much depth, had I done so this would have never happened = SHOULD BE = contemplating my actions in TOO MUCH DEPTH...HAD I DONE SO, THIS would have never happened.
3. Gerard’s arms me against his chest as I stood = ARMS ME...? What's that meant to be?!

Lol. I hope that helps lovie. I still might have missed things but your personal spell check got the main ones... I hope. :D
Take Care and UPDATE SOON!

Chocolate Werewolf Over and Out!!

hah nice. its always fun to be excited about thing like awesome fight scenes. speaking of late comments, im glad u dont mind that i comment late. im always late for everything. this semester i blame fucking geometry. math makes no sense in my mind. rambling is fun, sorta an art. i think a lot of people who write tend to ramble just because they're so used to explaining everything. thats my theory at least. wow, i ramble WAYY to muchh..

incase u didnt get it from reading my long, drawn out, slightly late, rambling comment i left for ur story....i love the updates. :]

*cringes at evil laugh*
yay, u updated! only problem is i procrastinated on a paper thats due tomorrow, so now i have to write that instead of reading ur amazing story. :[[ i may stay up extra late so i can read it though.

i think u should update tonight. :]]

You made an EPIC Faux Pas lovie...
"Come on HOPE I’ll I drive you back to the flat" Um....LUNA'S POV....remember?
LOL
Also:
"quietly sliding his arms under my mine and pulling to my feet" = add My in there
"He strode around to my side of the car and helped me OUR" = Out
"Mikey as anger started to boil in my veins they’re high again!" = you need to add a full stop after veins.
“Let’s just leave THEM to it.” = them
"SHE my best friend but she won’t even listen ..." = She's
"on the floor NEST to him as he cried silently" = next
"turned his body towards me and wrapped his arms around MY hiding his face" = me
"head gently and LEAD down with him" = laid
"With this I mind I finally fell asleep" = in mind
I think that is everything... you really should re-read your work Sazzle! :P

Chocolate Werewolf over and out! Xx