Hey! I updated He Smells Like the Ocean, my Brian story! I apologize for the long wait between updates, and I can assure you that it won't happen again! If you still wish to read, here's the link for my story. Any comments are appreciated, as well.
Since you seem to know so much about my story and how it should go, try giving us some positive feedback instead of all negative. It's rude, and it takes a shit long time to write this. If you don't like it, don't read it. Simple as that. Comments are for feedback, what you gave me wasn't anything helpful at all. How would you like the story to unfold? Do I need to write detailed descriptions of what really goes on in Breaking Bad, because if you've watched the show, it's highly irrelevant. It would benefit us a ton more if you actually gave us ideas on what you, the reader, would like to see in this story.