comingsummers / Comments

Yeah, no it's okay! I don't get easily offended haha. Yeah, I read the first three books and I don't know, I didn't want to make this story TOO much the books or the movie. I want it to be fan fiction but also original, in a way. I'm glad you are giving me your input, it really helps! Thank you. :)

@ lilacpony
I'm glad that I didn't offend you by telling you to slow down a little. Its great that you had already noticed that. Sometimes you just need to step back and look over what you have in order to see the big picture. I know its that way for me a lot of the time.
Thanks for clearing up the Tyson situation! Have you read the books? If not, let me just tell you that childlike is a bit of an understatement.... he mostly had the mentality of a toddler. He was a very sweet and likable character, but not someone that I would count on to protect me in the woods.
Anyway, your story is spot on and I will definitely continue to give you my input. Thanks!

Thank you for the comment/feedback! And its crazy, earlier I was thinking about slowing it down some as well! I was reading through my chapters, looking for any errors or something that might confuse readers, and I said to myself, "I should probably add more detail and dialogue and try not to make it so, you know, fast-paced. I based him off the movies (which I have seen) and I considered very friendly and child-like. His appearance is based off the movies as well! I know his character from the books is quite different from the movies, though. Once again, thank you for the subscription and comment. If you ever see an error or something dont hesitate to tell me. I love feedback, I want to make things as good as possible for my readers! :)