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Haha, I made it, but if you want, I can make you a background too. :] I made my friend one yesterday. It's weird, cause back when I used Quizilla, I was always asking people to make me a background, but now everyone's asking me. xD But yeah, anyways, if you want one, I can make one for you.

hey there. :]
Just wanted to drop by and say hey.
McFly kicks some major asssssss.
:D

Uhm, message me if you want to know what wrong with your stories.
I can give you some tips to prevent you from getting banned.
... or PWNT....

Hey Zoe.
Love your page.
I'm a McFly fan also.
Really can't deicde who's the best though.
I'm gonna read some of your work now.
Talk to you soon?
:D

Hey! I'm turning 14 on July Tenth

That's really good, then. I'm extremely and utterly pleased for you. =D Keep up the good work!

I'm anal retentive about grammar, which helps, but other than that, you have to write what you want to write, be it weird or unconventional. Give the readers something you want to give them. Let them walk away with something. At the same time, you're going to want to give them an incentive to read. Stories without love in them rarely draw readers because there's not much to it. I mean, a cool story about four teenage boys hiking through the woods and coming across different things could be interesting, but who would want to read it, you know?

I guess what I'm trying to say is, I don't know what my secret is. I read over my stuff a lot, if that helps. I usually read something four times after I write it, walking away from the computer and occupying myself between reads. That doesn't include reading over sections while I'm writing, either. I don't post a lot because writing takes me a long time. I don't want to publish anything on the internet that people could ever laugh at (in a bad way).

Bah, I keep writing you novels of scold telling you how to be a writer and I hate it. There is no set form for writing. Just... type.

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Well I'm glad you were inspired. As for the cheesy story line, just make up another. Write something you'd want to read. You don't always want to read cheesy, unbelievable story lines, do you? Think about a plot that will make people say "wow" when they finish. Keep cliches to a minimum. For example, characters who are suicidal is a cliche. Characters dying at the end is a cliche. Car accidents that help two people meet. Being in love with your best friend's brother. Being in love with your brother's best friend. Meeting the band backstage at a concert, totally cliche and unrealistic. The band really doesn't want to meet their future wife at a concert. Who wants to marry a die hard fan? I don't know. You could use them if you wanted, but readers won't be too impressed. Send them to me before you post if you really want my opinion. If you don't want it, you can disregard everything I just said.

Oh, and writing is like 60% grammar, so if you want to send me stories to fix up for you before you post them, feel free.

Attention Deficit Disorder. It basically means I can't focus on anything for too long unless my interest is kept up.

I'm glad you like my stories, especially So Much Has Changed. That one took so much work to write. And you never know who Josie will end up with. Mostly because I myself do not know. I think it's going to stop being ages and just be Present after the next one, since the time is about now with all of the band's ages. I'm still thinking about it.

Is it a fanfic? I know that sounds shallow, but my ADD kicks in after a chapter or so if I haven't lusted the main boy before.

I like Dougie, anyways. That purple-hair phase... so so good. And this picture I have next to my words here... very very adorable.

So I've been informed that it was a rumor, though he and Giovanna have been going together for like 6 years so I'd still feel just as bad about lusting after him. Oops about the mistake, though. It's okay, we all make them, right?

You didn't know? Yeah, he and Giovanna are serious about each other. It's actually very endearing that he picked such a good girl to get engaged to. They were dating before McFLY and everything. Maybe it'll show people that rock stars don't have to marry whores.

Oh, just a bit. XD He's pretty cute, I suppose. If you're into that whole bass-player thing. Which I am, admittedly. He and Tom are tied for my affection, but I figure, since Tom's engaged and all, it's not proper to lust after him. Dougie, though. Damn, he's really good looking.

Woah. That's a lot of teenie talk. It's alright, though. I'm used to it. And getting to see them in concert is awesome. I get video feeds and have to let those suffice. I wish I could REALLY teleport, like I tell people I can.

Woah, and England is not crappieeeee... My God, if you wanted to go see McFLY in Liverpool on May 16th, you could. I, however, am stuck in the states. Unhappiness.

McFLY makes my life. Just to let you know. It's good to find others who love them as well.

yeah im great thanks!
have seen them live?
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hey!!
cool profile i [s]like[/s]love mcfly!!
hope u r ok!!
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